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With chinchilla glass ocean waves lapping my toes fancy flights take off. Wren pecks at my thoughts as it perches on tree stump posing as prince toad. Caveat flashing light intrudes in my dreamy state warns me to leave prince

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Date: 7/2/2015 9:06:00 AM
Lovely images. Is this modern haiku then? I'm still trying to perfect my traditional haiku...
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Josefina Costales
Date: 7/2/2015 11:09:00 AM
I must confess I don't know much about haiku. just trying to emulate the 5-7-5 lines in a stanza but sometimes I'm not content with just 1 stanza when my thoughts are still bubbling to be expressed.:)