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A collaboration written with the Silent One in 2022. 
 

Love is like fragile wings. romance an illusion of moonlight delusions. I recall when summer skies hypnotised, in the pleasure of your pleasing presence, I used to gaze at the doves of love above, admiring their delicate reflections in your eyes. Revealing the tempress inside you, our butterfly hearts used to flutter, watching our shy shadows dance, to the rhythm of brave waves of hope. Tribulations of time led to a decay within our garden, as poisoned poetic petals, drowned in a wild river of roses. Now we are like a destitute of wildflowers, our souls resembling moths of shame. There is a sadness in silence, when there is confusion in communication. Tongues remain oppressed in misunderstanding. When candlelight caresses no longer feel the same, as misplaced moments begin to untame. Songs of passion we sang for us, escape as anthems of selfish games. Should we muster dry conversations? Neglect our flower garden in this storm? Within wilting vines where weeping willows hide, it's a crime that the crying crescent moon mirrors our stolen hours. Specks of cosmic dusts refuse to unravel silver spotted dreams, when time becomes a nightmare ticking beneath electric fields of scarlet. I've lost and found you in diversified seasons, as winds of evanescence curl empty promises into pearly shells. Every poetic phrase you’ve place in my borderline mind, no longer hydrates this glassy oyster heart - will I forever remain confined within restrained walls? Perhaps this is just another beginning of an ever-glowing end. Painted in restless nights from subtle strokes, of forgotten devotion felt like forbidden nostalgia, beckoning monotonous forlorn silhouettes to depart. The last star shines and bleeds broken hopes in dwindling wraiths upon love gliding within trifling shadows. For, sometimes feelings wane like ephemeral phases of moon-bows that seize every lingering last light of life, unveiling tides of change to wriggle into thin fogs of grey. Yet your clarity is forever framed as timeless souvenirs, designed as fine aesthetic art colouring me with affection. Forgive me, but I will perpetually plant loyal seeds, so our collaborations continue to blossom in fresh fragrances.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 2/27/2024 8:19:00 AM
A beautiful collaboration between two amazing poets, well done both, ink and Silent One… Beryl
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Date: 1/23/2024 1:48:00 PM
Your poem about the struggle between alienation and rationality in life, the internal conflicts that arise from it, and the search for harmony and understanding in a chaotic world. The word choice is rich and evocative, using imagery and metaphor to convey the emotions and experiences. You employ literary devices such as alliteration ("playing charades with the grim reaper"), and simile ("Harmony harbours in harvesting heirloom) to create vivid and emotive language. Great poem from 2 top poets
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Date: 1/23/2024 6:39:00 AM
an outstanding collaboration, dear Ink. The poem was captivating with its imagery and alliterations (Within wilting vines where weeping willows hide). Your poem speaks of love and enduring friendships requiring us all to 'perpetually plant loyal seeds.' Well said...a collaborative masterpiece. Thanks for sharing and have a pleasant Tuesday, hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/23/2024 6:26:00 AM
Splendid write as always. Wonderfully emotive, dwelling in metaphors. A superb collaboration from two of the best.
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Date: 1/23/2024 1:42:00 AM
"I used to gaze at the doves of love above, admiring their delicate reflections in your eyes." There was such a time, but under different circumstances, a change has come over and love came to a decay. But the possibility of a regeneration can't be ruled out. "Perhaps this is just another beginning of an ever-glowing end." Let us hope so. "Forgive me, but I will perpetually plant loyal seeds, so our collaborations continue to blossom in fresh fragrances". Let us hope again that seeds will sprout ! A superb collaboration on love and romance. All the Best to both of you !
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Date: 1/23/2024 12:12:00 AM
Gosh, my dear Ink and dear Silent One, what a magnificent collaboration you both have woven with such delicate details about love and how vivid instances can unfold with time.. Rainbows of healing can sometimes bleed into those emotions suppressed within past & silence can steal those moments of blossoming love.. Misunderstanding and lack of communication too, can unfurl sadness in many ways, leading confusion. So wisely and poetically you both have conveyed that here, your lines flow impeccably
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/23/2024 12:16:00 AM
Together, I couldn't guess who wrote which part.. Especially that opening really captivated my attention and I couldn't agree more! "Love is like fragile wings.romance an illusion of moonlight delusions", "as poisoned poetic petals, drowned in a wild river of roses", "I've lost and found you in diversified seasons" Ahh, sigh.. That somehow makes me emotional.. "For, sometimes feelings wane like ephemeral phases of moon-bows that seize every lingering last light of life.. wriggle into thin fogs of grey" So many artistically mesmerizing lines here & the depth is so heart-touching.. Absolutely loved reading this collab, you both write flawlessly together! Keep writing & shining always ~ sending best wishes :) a FAV
Date: 1/22/2024 5:20:00 PM
This is beautiful. I love the varied tones of friendship. I send hugs.
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Date: 1/22/2024 4:19:00 PM
So sweet poem! Have a sweet day ~ AA :-)
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Date: 1/22/2024 1:04:00 PM
Interesting lines penned so alike but different. Thanks for sharing this one but two. Sara K
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Date: 1/22/2024 11:28:00 AM
Wow ! Just ... wow!
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Date: 1/22/2024 10:46:00 AM
Another masterpiece… beautiful …
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Date: 1/22/2024 10:25:00 AM
This was in 2022? We have done so many, I struggle to remember them all.. You were always great to collab with, this one was all your hard work..
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/22/2024 10:30:00 AM
Lol yea. Nah its you as well. And its hard work writing with you yes so i agree hard work thank you for always writing with me grateful
Date: 1/22/2024 10:24:00 AM
- Never neglect a seed in a garden...it is there to grow ... like you two ... a wonderful co-write :) - hugs
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/22/2024 10:30:00 AM
Thank you dear anne lise im grateful for your feedback
Date: 1/22/2024 9:47:00 AM
our butterfly hearts used to flutter, watching our shy shadows dance,. .poisoned poetic petals,drowned in a wild river of roses...those lines.. such pureness!! wilting vines where weeping willows hide, cosmic dusts refuse to unravel silver spotted dreams, electric fields of scarlet. elegant weave of the elements.. imagery is amazing . clarity is forever framed as timeless souvenirs, gorgeous!! our collaborations continue to blossom in fresh fragrances.. n so it has!! Marvelous collaboration
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/22/2024 10:30:00 AM
Papi sorry u had to read this long poem appreciate ur support
Date: 1/22/2024 9:31:00 AM
Simply beautiful, very delicate.- I liked the part about the moon- bows; that relates to me. Truly gifted art. <3
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/22/2024 10:31:00 AM
Thank you dear paige appreciate u always

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