Collaboration Wild-Wind Rose

Maybe the boy is "crazy", but "crazy" for the sake of art.
...You thought: "I can see, I am etched in the boy's heart,
but he is still 'flying,' he is still striving to take off, he has
'wind' in his head." Quote from a Chagall letter: To My City Vitebsk*

WILD-WIND ROSE

Stirs emotions supernal — Chagall’s Bella catching the cerulean wind.
High, a kite with eternal surrender. Her Marc never shears the string.
Zephyr of bling, facet of reflections in the moorish blue-diamond sky.
Mourning spouse clings to her angel wings.

Provokes intoxication of her white-linen collar — a candle sputters
the yearning of passionate colors — a tightrope walker tiptoes
between the earth and heaven’s gate, too many years to wait.
The artist brushes a wild-wind rose.

He wanted to shake her out of every snowglobe he put her in.
Freely, he had imprisoned her in his paintings — his creations,
and forever his precious wife was shut in with a gold-plated key;
Chagall signed. . . to exalt admiration.

7/14/2019
for contest FINETUNE THIS COLLABORATION sponsored by Line Gauthier

*From Wikipedia
**Wind Rose - a diagram showing for a given place the relative frequency or frequency and strength of winds from different directions (Merriam-Webster)

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Date: 8/6/2019 1:59:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your top win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2019 4:29:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 8/5/2019 9:12:00 AM
Supernal colors, sounds and feelings of this poem made me leave the ground. The most weightless and indigo gold I've ever seen. Congrats and fave :3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2019 3:48:00 PM
What a resplendent comment! Thank so much, Kurt! :)
Date: 8/5/2019 5:48:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Love your concept, Kim. Congrats on your top win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2019 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Line! <3 Kim
Date: 7/15/2019 5:26:00 PM
Wow Kim, You really did a good using Line's verse and created a well written piece. I see an Anthology book with this fine poem it. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2019 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 7/15/2019 3:06:00 PM
"He wanted to shake her out of every snowglobe he put her in. Freely, he had imprisoned her in his paintings — his creations," - this is a wonderful write. If it is not in the winner's circle, I do not know Line and I KNOW Line! Wow! Kim, you have blown me away with this one.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2019 4:52:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 7/14/2019 9:01:00 PM
You have done more then fine tune this collab, you gave it wings and then you took it home/ Love it, a winner by far, have a great evening dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2019 9:03:00 PM
Wow! Thanks, Pixie!
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