Collaboration

And yet
Early to me is 11 AM
With my hair a mess and not yet dressed
My wrinkles are my prime concern
Now all I see is Jeopardy
On my 54” TV
Old they say
Getting grayer each day
But Revlon saved the day
My teeth always shine
Using my denture Cleanser
It is now 12 AM
Time to hit the sack
For a short Nap!

Contest: Play With Me, COLLABORATION
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
Date Created: 08/15/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Love your last line and the fact that you share your secrets so freely: Revlon and denture whitener. Congrats, Bobby.
May Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Thank You Line!!! The last line was pretty good lol
Mchattie Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Who doesn't love a good nap? Have a great day my friend.
May Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 2:42 PM
So true David, thanks for stopping in!
Cunningham Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 1:08 PM
As long as its before noon lol. Lovely to see you back Bobby. Good luck. Tom.
May Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 1:21 PM
Thank you Tom!!
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