Collaborating In the Clouds

Oh God Beyond and yonder, they tell me, as far as can be, does there exist "beyond expectations" a land that seems to me, a melting place of loving hearts vibrating rhythmically but sweetly mute, Where speech & communication without words is complete. does beyond expectations lie these lands................ this land where everyone is each other's priority and just not options of superiority or of inferiority. such is a land, my mind, it tends to seek, they tell me to find this land the possibility is very bleak where I see not walls, barriers or borders of human creations of any kind, striving , fervously.....to ........find, Oh God... please help me, please make me understand, As, my churning mind it...... seeks............. such lands
name: sashi prabhu
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Brown Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Clouds" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
Prabhu Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 11:10 AM
thank you Carol
Williams Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 1:40 AM
Sashi congrats on your win...David
Prabhu Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 11:10 AM
thANk you David
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July 7, 2012 at 11:56 PM
Sashi, congratulations with your beautiful collaboration in the clouds. Read every poem over and over. Thank you for the support, God Bless :-) PD
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July 8, 2012 at 12:14 PM
thanx PD!!!
Richards Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 11:38 AM
Soooo beautiful...your words are so beseeching that I can't help but think they are heard with a compassionate ear! Wonderful!
Prabhu Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 7:16 PM
thank you Carrie!
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Sashi, this is a beautiful written poem - Thank you for "a land of love". - oxox Anne-Lise
Prabhu Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 10:52 AM
thank you Anne lise.
Henderson Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 10:45 AM
My prayers are with you my friend.
Prabhu Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 10:52 AM
thanks a million!
Henderson Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 10:45 AM
Peace and many blessings to you!
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