Coldest Winter Ever

Let me tell you about the coldest winter ever.  I thought the snow would continue to fall 
forever.   A blizzard came through and snowed us in.  I caught the flu and was delirious for 
an entire weekend.  The electricity was out and no doubt all was lost.  It seems we could not 
overcome the frost.  Kerosene heaters could only do so much.  Everything in the house was 
ice cold to the touch.  We were so cold, we did not even have a desire to eat.  Huddled 
together, fighting the weather with our body heat.
       The winter was so mean, and just when there was a sprinke of hope...we ran out of 
kerosene!  And cold water equals bad hygiene.  We eventually ate saltines for protein.  We 
would shiver under the covers thinking we were gonna freeze to death; but we discovered 
warmth in our hot smelly breath.  During the night we used a flashlight. Being out from under 
covers our bodies would be attacked by frost bite.
       On that last morning at the crack of dawn.  The snow was melting and I could see parts 
of the lawn.  We were all physically, emothionally drained.  But the cold still remained.  I 
then knew, that too, would not last forever.  But it was still the coldest winter ever. 
 
 
Note: Constance la france wanted to feel the chill of winter for the contest "Let it 
Snow" ...Read on but don't get frost bit...lol
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Griffiths Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 2:11 PM
Congratulations Jimmy, lovely poem. Pam
George   Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 7:13 AM
Hi Jimmy, I remember winter's like that while growing up in the Maritime Provinces of Canada - along the Bay of Fundy. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Love, Lainie
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November 5, 2009 at 3:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Let it Snow Contest Jimmy. Love, Carol
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November 4, 2009 at 7:54 PM
Great write, Jimmy, enjoyed your narrative... congrats on your placement in the Let It Snow contest... well earned ... well deserved win... I am happy to share the same stage with u as honorable mention.... hope to read more of your poetry...very soon... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" per HGarvey Daniel Esquire.. have u checked out his Daffy Definitions yet? lots of fun.. hope u participate...
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November 4, 2009 at 6:39 PM
A great narrative, Jimmy! Keep up the good work, and congratulations! ~ Carrie
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