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Colder Then Ice

The touch of a frost bitten hand makes me chill with a flare of passion. Death is my only friend and i cling to to this fact the cold over dose makes my body numb. Warmth is like a blade to my skin it dosen't fit in to my life like most other things Fire is an enemy i blame for many things. Colder then ice is my soul, passion only seems to come by bold out goings of standing in twenty below, The danger of dieing lingers like a first kiss and a smile dances on my lips, my eyes tweak with fluttered excitement. I feel weaker each day of summers breath breathing down my neck i wish the white winds of winter would take me away a slip me into my cold shell once more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/4/2009 8:37:00 PM
I don't know where you reside Jeff! but here in Minnesota when the temp gets down below zero, oxygen is compressed! so when you breathe it in deeply, you oxygenate at a higher-level! (ertu, more energy!) like when you breathe the air around a waterfall! its all about the negative ions released in the air!! babyyyy!!!
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