Coldblood Horse

Coldblood. 
When I first saw you, you were slowly lapping up water hidden by a trees dark 
shadow. 
Beautiful. With your long sweeping main and tail.
No one dares to ride such beauty, but I do.
Then I’m there. Bouncing up and down on the saddle as she gallops up the trail.
The wind soaring through my hair. 
Coldblood horse. 
Tell me your secret.

-Kallie Mason
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 1:56 PM
Kallie, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 8:51 PM
I really like this one. It is quite different and intriguing. congratulations on the winners' list.
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 5:32 PM
Creative work..Congrats..Sara
Taylor Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 5:05 PM
Congrats on your win, Kallie. Excellent piece. Great job. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 2:05 PM
Congrats Kallie on your awesome win in the horse contest with this exciting entry luv.. enjoy..
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Kallie. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 6:21 PM
Very pretty Kallie. Good luck if you put it into the contest. Love, joyce
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