Notes About The Poem

Cold Sweat

Coy about
Opening up the floodgates; expressions of
Love for her
Drowning little by little in a...

Sea of anxiety, of love perhaps unrequited
Wishing she'd feel the scorching
Ember of his desire
Anticipating and aching for her...
Touch. Oh, the hunger, the hunger as he waits!


BRIAN'S CHOICE K,any form,any theme poetry contest
Contest Judged:  5/19/2020 (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 

Date written: 05/17/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 6:01 AM
A sensual write, Edward. Well penned.
Ibeh Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 7:05 AM
Thank you, Caren:-)
Makama Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 6:57 AM
I envisage these onrushing feelings you've well expressed here exhibited by a waiting groom already on the aisle as he looks at the door to see the change of serenity from the first wave of his bride's flourishing gown. What a lovely poem this is.
Ibeh Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and visit, Funom:-) I'm glad you liked this poem!
Vangaveti Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 3:24 AM
Oh!! This is overflowing with emotions!!! Good luck in the contest!!
Ibeh Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 6:21 AM
Thank you so much, Swetha:-) Most obliged.
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