Cold Sweat

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Coy about Opening up the floodgates; expressions of Love for her Drowning little by little in a... Sea of anxiety, of love perhaps unrequited Wishing she'd feel the scorching Ember of his desire Anticipating and aching for her... Touch. Oh, the hunger, the hunger as he waits! BRIAN'S CHOICE K,any form,any theme poetry contest Contest Judged: 5/19/2020 (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by: Brian Strand Date written: 05/17/2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/24/2020 6:01:00 AM

A sensual write, Edward. Well penned.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/24/2020 7:05:00 AM

Thank you, Caren:-)

Funom Makama

Date: 5/19/2020 6:57:00 AM

I envisage these onrushing feelings you've well expressed here exhibited by a waiting groom already on the aisle as he looks at the door to see the change of serenity from the first wave of his bride's flourishing gown. What a lovely poem this is.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/19/2020 3:20:00 PM

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and visit, Funom:-) I'm glad you liked this poem!

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/18/2020 3:24:00 AM

Oh!! This is overflowing with emotions!!! Good luck in the contest!!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/18/2020 6:21:00 AM

Thank you so much, Swetha:-) Most obliged.