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Cold Skies

a muted sun hangs low distant aloof withdrawn pouting Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~DARK CLOUDS~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on May 24, 2020 for CONTEST NO.770 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - Honorable Mention Posted on December 16, 2019

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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/20/2019 12:02:00 PM
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Instant visual that pops from the page.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/20/2019 12:27:00 PM
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Thanks you so much, ML.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/19/2019 1:53:00 AM
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Pouting is exactly write!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/19/2019 8:43:00 AM
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LOL thanks, Caren.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/16/2019 8:20:00 PM
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Yes, 'muted' is the perfect word for the cold early wnter's sun! Kudos, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2019 8:22:00 PM
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Thanks, Gershon, Much appreciated.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/16/2019 11:42:00 AM
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It seems to be hidden behind clouds in my area, too. A foreshadowing of what is yet to come. Great word choices to describe a dismal sun.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2019 12:03:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Lin. Much appreciated.

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