Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Cold Skies

a muted sun
hangs low
distant
aloof
withdrawn
pouting



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~DARK CLOUDS~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on May 24, 2020 for CONTEST NO.770 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  Honorable Mention

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M. L. Kiser December 20, 2019 at 12:02 PM Instant visual that pops from the page. Line Gauthier December 20, 2019 at 12:27 PM Thanks you so much, ML.

Caren Krutsinger December 19, 2019 at 1:53 AM Pouting is exactly write! Line Gauthier December 19, 2019 at 8:43 AM LOL thanks, Caren.

Gershon Wolf December 16, 2019 at 8:20 PM Yes, 'muted' is the perfect word for the cold early wnter's sun! Kudos, Gershon Line Gauthier December 16, 2019 at 8:22 PM Thanks, Gershon, Much appreciated.

Lin Lane December 16, 2019 at 11:42 AM It seems to be hidden behind clouds in my area, too. A foreshadowing of what is yet to come. Great word choices to describe a dismal sun. Line Gauthier December 16, 2019 at 12:03 PM Thank you so much, Lin. Much appreciated.