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Cold Shoulder

The side of a road’s called a shoulder, but why? The resemblance, to me, isn’t striking. The berm or the edge, a more literal choice, Would be, somehow, much more to my liking. I enjoy a good metaphor when apropos But in this case I’m driven to wonder Why not elbow or ankle or even an ear – All could help to keep stop lanes asunder. Who came up with this phrase? Not a bureaucrat, no. Maybe somebody clever with wordin’ And because of his efforts, we’re left, to this day, With the need to thus shoulder the burden.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/7/2019 7:13:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I love these fun one's of your's. <3 :)
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Date: 9/1/2019 6:59:00 AM
And you say I'm clever, Ilene? "...thus shoulder the burden." Another term is "the apron" BTW. But I've never heard of a "berm" or did you mean "term"? / M
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 9/1/2019 5:29:00 PM
hey maurice! a berm is a flat strip of land beside a road, river or canal, so i think it works in the poem. i've never heard the term apron, though - interesting!
Date: 8/31/2019 7:38:00 PM
Interesting take on a common expression! B'Shalom Matthew Anish
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