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Cold Shoulder

The side of a road’s called a shoulder, but why?
The resemblance, to me, isn’t striking.
The berm or the edge, a more literal choice,
Would be, somehow, much more to my liking.

I enjoy a good metaphor when apropos
But in this case I’m driven to wonder
Why not elbow or ankle or even an ear – 
All could help to keep stop lanes asunder.

Who came up with this phrase? Not a bureaucrat, no.
Maybe somebody clever with wordin’
And because of his efforts, we’re left, to this day,
With the need to thus shoulder the burden.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Johnson Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 7:13 AM
Oh my gosh, I love these fun one's of your's. <3 :)
Rigoler Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 6:59 AM
And you say I'm clever, Ilene? "...thus shoulder the burden." Another term is "the apron" BTW. But I've never heard of a "berm" or did you mean "term"? / M
Bauer Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 5:29 PM
hey maurice! a berm is a flat strip of land beside a road, river or canal, so i think it works in the poem. i've never heard the term apron, though - interesting!
Anish Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 7:38 PM
Interesting take on a common expression! B'Shalom Matthew Anish
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