Cold Rhino

As I was walking in the snow,
I chanced to meet a cold rhino.
  It began to sneeze,
  Creating quite a breeze:
Now what to do? --I dunno.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 4:09 PM
Lol gershon sure made me smile congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Laughter makes the world go round! Thanks a million, Jan. :-) gw
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Back with congrats! :) xomo!
Wolf Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Thanks, Maureen, as always.
Gentile Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations Gershon !!
Wolf Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:09 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Y. Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 9:02 PM
Lol! Gershon, That's quite the predicament. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:10 PM
Update: Rhino's gonna be alright, but the breeze took down three little fawns passing by at the time. Pity about those fawns...Thank for checking this one out, Alexis! :) Gershon
Roper Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 8:07 PM
hahaha.. this is so funny... Congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Wolf Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Glad it tickled your funnybone. Laughter's the best medicine, I always say. (And you don't have to be sick to benefit!!). Best wishes, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 7:12 PM
Congrats on your win Gershon. Hopefully it was nothing serious and your cold rhino is fine now in some warm corner. LOL
Wolf Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Rhino's gonna be alright...Three people got pneumonia from the breeze though...For a great laugh, google "Animal Stories with Larry Lujack and Little Tommy" It was a 5 minute radio segment on WLS-AM radio back in the day in Chicago. I think you'll howl. :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 10:59 PM
Lol! Enjoyed :)
Wolf Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 11:58 AM
I'm so happy that you got a laugh out of this one, Maureen! May we all smile and laugh our way through the rest of winter! :) Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 9:51 PM
That is quite the conundrum, Gershon. Good luck with it. In the meantime, an enjoyable poem.
Wolf Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Yeah! I gotta figure out what in creation I ought to do here. ---Oops, waited too long. Rhino just blew me away. Oh, well....
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