Get Your Premium Membership

Cold One

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Chuck Melugin.


Gentlemen........If you've been there....fave this poem!!

Silence sits between us on this sofa Even after I apologized 'Thought I might.... be in for some lovin' But lately...I just haven't seen no signs Chorus: Tonight..I'm sitting here with a Cold One! 'Tryna start a fire in a heart that's frozen She won't come around, I've got a case of love iced down Tonight..I'm sitting here.... with a Cold One! I watch her baby blue eyes turn to steel Yeah I'd be in the dirt, If thoughts could kill And now, she's got her head down in a book After givin' me another laser look Repeat chorus I know things like this can take some time I've gotta drift, It's gonna take all night 'Think I'll catch some football on TV And Pull my old ice chest up close to me Tonight..I'm sitting here with a Cold One! 'Tryna start a fire in a heart that's frozen She won't come around, I've got a case of love iced down Tonight..I'm sitting here.... with a cold one! Tag: Brrrrr.....Tonight I'm sitting here.... with a cold one! Protected by copyright All rights reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/11/2017 4:47:00 PM
Love the rhythm here Chuck, the story and it's implications..
Login to Reply
Melugin Avatar
Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/12/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Harry!
Date: 11/5/2017 5:08:00 AM
Absolutely hilarious lyrics Chuck I can hear this as a hit country song. Ditch the ice maiden and stick with the beer and football lol :-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Melugin Avatar
Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/5/2017 5:46:00 AM
Thank you Jan! I love your comment! ice maiden lol You are the best, chuck
Date: 11/4/2017 10:32:00 AM
I've not been there Chuck, but I feel your pain.. lol
Login to Reply
Melugin Avatar
Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/5/2017 5:53:00 AM
Thanks Silent, It's been rough! LoL
Date: 11/4/2017 7:44:00 AM
This is awesome :)
Login to Reply
Melugin Avatar
Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/5/2017 5:49:00 AM
Thanks MM. I'm glad you enjoyed!
Date: 11/4/2017 7:29:00 AM
Lovely song Chuck--enjoyed reading your poem!
Login to Reply
Melugin Avatar
Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/5/2017 5:50:00 AM
Vijay, I'm glad you enjoyed the fun!