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Cold One

Silence sits between us on this sofa
Even after I apologized
'Thought I might.... be in for some lovin'
But lately...I just haven't seen no signs

Chorus:

Tonight..I'm sitting here with a Cold One!
'Tryna start a fire in a heart that's frozen
She won't come around,
I've got a case of love iced down
Tonight..I'm sitting here.... with a Cold One!

I watch her baby blue eyes turn to steel
Yeah I'd be in the dirt, If thoughts could kill
And now, she's got her head down in a book
After givin' me another laser look

Repeat chorus

I know things like this can take some time
I've gotta drift, It's gonna take all night
'Think I'll catch some football on TV
And Pull my old ice chest up close to me

Tonight..I'm sitting here with a Cold One!
'Tryna start a fire in a heart that's frozen
She won't come around,
I've got a case of love iced down
Tonight..I'm sitting here.... with a cold one!

Tag:
Brrrrr.....Tonight I'm sitting here.... with a cold one!



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Horsman Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 4:47 PM
Love the rhythm here Chuck, the story and it's implications..
Melugin Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Thank you Harry!
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 5:08 AM
Absolutely hilarious lyrics Chuck I can hear this as a hit country song. Ditch the ice maiden and stick with the beer and football lol :-) hugs jan xx
Melugin Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 5:46 AM
Thank you Jan! I love your comment! ice maiden lol You are the best, chuck
One Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 10:32 AM
I've not been there Chuck, but I feel your pain.. lol
Melugin Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 5:53 AM
Thanks Silent, It's been rough! LoL
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 7:44 AM
This is awesome :)
Melugin Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 5:49 AM
Thanks MM. I'm glad you enjoyed!
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Lovely song Chuck--enjoyed reading your poem!
Melugin Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 5:50 AM
Vijay, I'm glad you enjoyed the fun!
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