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Cold Is the Night

Cold is the night and dark and long
though with the gloom bleak humour comes 
we'll make it through, our love is strong

North wind howls under midnight's gong
and buries all neath ice and snow
cold is the night and dark and  long

Silence deep as snowflakes throng
unbidden doubt ousts fragile sleep 
we'll make it through, our love is strong

On melting snow, black springtails sprong
in tribute  to sun's slow return
though night is cold and dark and  long

From cedar green, red cardinal's song
foretells of warmer days to come
we'll make it through, our love is strong

With sun's return spring comes along       
snow melts, rain falls and life glows green
the days are warm, the sun is strong 
we made it through, our love is long


1/25/2016

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Date: 12/23/2017 3:47:00 PM
Dropping by to wish you Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 12/24/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Richard, all the best to you and your's for Christmas and the New Year.
Date: 6/28/2017 11:35:00 PM
I love to read poems like this. I have 2-3 poems somewhat like yours. Belladonna, The Great Swan, favs :)
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Date: 1/6/2017 9:45:00 PM
Beautiful
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/7/2017 3:28:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn
Date: 3/26/2016 8:09:00 PM
Beautiful villanelle Dave
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/27/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Nayda
Date: 3/14/2016 12:59:00 PM
Awesome villanelle, Dave. I love when I barely notice the refrains ... it's tricky to do. "From cedar green, red cardinal's song foretells of warmer days to come" ... enjoyed the little harbinger of the coming warmer months. Great images.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/14/2016 4:41:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and kind comments Timothy. Much more than cardinal now, my wife reported a woodcock this morning.
Date: 2/23/2016 5:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your seamless Villanelle..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I enjoyed writing that one..Sara
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/25/2016 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Sara, there are a few seams but it was fun to write. And between it and the contest I learned a lot about the form. And congrats on your fine Villanelle, it deserved it's placement.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/24/2016 9:34:00 PM
Thanks Sara, there are a few seams but it was fun to write. And between it and the contest I learned a lot about the form. And congrats on your fine Villanelle, it deserved it's placement.
Date: 2/13/2016 7:00:00 PM
anytime, Have yourself a wonderful Valentine's Day. LINDA
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Date: 2/7/2016 2:56:00 PM
dave, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/12/2016 8:03:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 1/25/2016 2:09:00 PM
Well done..sure enjoyed the read. BG
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/26/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Barbara
Date: 1/25/2016 12:55:00 PM
- Love is the greatest we have - A beautiful poem, Dave - // Anne-Lise :)
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/26/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
Date: 1/25/2016 11:57:00 AM
Very beautiful. Shows a lot of emotion.
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