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Cold Is the Night

Cold is the night and dark and long though with the gloom bleak humour comes we'll make it through, our love is strong North wind howls under midnight's gong and buries all neath ice and snow cold is the night and dark and long Silence deep as snowflakes throng unbidden doubt ousts fragile sleep we'll make it through, our love is strong On melting snow, black springtails sprong in tribute to sun's slow return though night is cold and dark and long From cedar green, red cardinal's song foretells of warmer days to come we'll make it through, our love is strong With sun's return spring comes along snow melts, rain falls and life glows green the days are warm, the sun is strong we made it through, our love is long 1/25/2016

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Date: 12/23/2017 3:47:00 PM
Dropping by to wish you Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 12/24/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Richard, all the best to you and your's for Christmas and the New Year.
Date: 6/28/2017 11:35:00 PM
I love to read poems like this. I have 2-3 poems somewhat like yours. Belladonna, The Great Swan, favs :)
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Date: 1/6/2017 9:45:00 PM
Beautiful
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/7/2017 3:28:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn
Date: 3/26/2016 8:09:00 PM
Beautiful villanelle Dave
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/27/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Nayda
Date: 3/14/2016 12:59:00 PM
Awesome villanelle, Dave. I love when I barely notice the refrains ... it's tricky to do. "From cedar green, red cardinal's song foretells of warmer days to come" ... enjoyed the little harbinger of the coming warmer months. Great images.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/14/2016 4:41:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and kind comments Timothy. Much more than cardinal now, my wife reported a woodcock this morning.
Date: 2/23/2016 5:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your seamless Villanelle..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I enjoyed writing that one..Sara
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/25/2016 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Sara, there are a few seams but it was fun to write. And between it and the contest I learned a lot about the form. And congrats on your fine Villanelle, it deserved it's placement.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/24/2016 9:34:00 PM
Thanks Sara, there are a few seams but it was fun to write. And between it and the contest I learned a lot about the form. And congrats on your fine Villanelle, it deserved it's placement.
Date: 2/13/2016 7:00:00 PM
anytime, Have yourself a wonderful Valentine's Day. LINDA
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Date: 2/7/2016 2:56:00 PM
dave, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/12/2016 8:03:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 1/25/2016 2:09:00 PM
Well done..sure enjoyed the read. BG
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/26/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Barbara
Date: 1/25/2016 12:55:00 PM
- Love is the greatest we have - A beautiful poem, Dave - // Anne-Lise :)
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/26/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
Date: 1/25/2016 11:57:00 AM
Very beautiful. Shows a lot of emotion.
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