Cold Hard Steel

Cold Hard Steel
My mouth wide open, gasping for breath, splashing, gurgling
Hopelessly going nowhere, treading, losing the fight
I can’t hear the clanking or yelling anymore, today is the day I have succumbed to his cruelness, numb, no thoughts, no feelings just sinking, floating, slowly being dragged down below 
His lack of love and affection has surrounded me like a cold hard steel chain bound around me.  
The black oval links is evidence that evil is not part of the circle of life
I’m drowning. He’s not listening.  Why won’t he help me? Doesn’t he care?
How did I let it go this far? 
A light from above, an angel reaches out a hand, follow me
Bursting through the crashing waves I rise above the depth of darkness
To find that God will always love me
All my tears have faded. Joyful smiles every day.
He is still part of my life but the chain has been broken, I have been set free because God will always 
love me. 
Even on the days when he doesn’t show me love and kindness 
I know I am not alone in this big old house. I kneel and take it to the throne. 	
And tell God about my day. 

Inspirational song Chain Breaker by Zac Williams 
Original poem 7/22/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Avila Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 6:34 PM
This poem speaks to me deeply and truly has a mind of its own. Great job Nancy!
Ashley Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 8:38 PM
Hi Nancy, such strong imagery. Congrats on your win! :)
Nusker Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 9:42 AM
Displays an array of emotions. Very nice poem. Congrats on your win.
Barden Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 12:51 AM
Such a powerful write, Nancy, and an exquisite example of victory over some of life's more daunting obstacles ... they can NEVER touch us - INSIDE. Wonderful - congrats on THIRD PLACE!! :-)
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