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Cold Feet

A frigid morning snowstorm
embraces its many guests,
a white veil at this wedding,
reluctant bridegroom.

11/07/2015


For "Winter Dodoitsu" contest sponsored by Heather Ober.

Copyright © George Aul | Year Posted 2015

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February 6, 2016 at 8:56 AM

your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!

February 6, 2016 at 1:56 PM

Thank you for the very kind reply, I hope you enjoy what you read..................... George

November 19, 2015 at 5:37 PM

Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

November 21, 2015 at 2:39 PM

Thank you very much............. George

November 14, 2015 at 7:49 AM

George, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT

November 16, 2015 at 9:51 AM

Thank you as always SKAT............ George

November 13, 2015 at 8:35 PM

Great imagery, George! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

November 16, 2015 at 9:51 AM

Thanks and congrats also............ George

Barbara Gorelick

November 13, 2015 at 3:07 PM

Cleverly done, congrats! BG

November 16, 2015 at 9:54 AM

Thanks and congrats on a clever poem too ............ George

November 13, 2015 at 2:49 PM

Love your take on winter George many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

November 16, 2015 at 9:52 AM

Thanks and congrats too..................... George

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