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Cold Call

A train derailed, the newsman said, And there are people hurt and dead. If someone that you love was there, Then call this number, if you dare. Imagine if you had to choose To call or wait to have some news. The agony of knowing not Would try what patience someone’s got. Though phoning could provide relief, For some, there might be only grief, Discovering an act of fate Has made their loved one doubly late.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/8/2013 9:23:00 AM
Dear Ilene, I'm caught in the web of your words today. I've ridden that line many times. Kathy
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Date: 12/4/2013 4:19:00 PM
Not knowing always has an aswer, sometimes it's health, sometimes it's cancer. But fate will always have it's way. There's just no getting around that day. Peace. :)
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Date: 12/2/2013 6:35:00 PM
Can't imagine being in that situation! What a choice! Hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 12/2/2013 1:44:00 PM
Cold call, Ilene! I'm glad you've shared this gloomy news! Friend, JM
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Date: 12/2/2013 10:00:00 AM
This is a heart-breaking moment for those families who had loved ones on that train. Indeed, the moments waiting to hear, would be horrendous........you said it well.
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