Cold Abyss

In a cold winter,
He hide himself into the ,
Lap of his mother to feel the,
Same warmth which embraced him in her womb.

She hugged him again ,
Divine love started flowing from her heart,
Penetrates each and every cells of him,
Felt ,he entered again in to her womb .

When he came out then ,
He was in a cold abyss ,
Embarrassed and alone,
Felt void in his deep being.

Now she is away in the arms of terrible destiny,
But  he cherishes again to feel the same warmth,
Almighty ,please allow him to feel it again,
At least in his dream ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/13/2017 9:12:00 AM
A VERY DEEP AND POWERFUL EXPRESSION OF EMOTION IN THIS FINE POEM MY FRIEND. "Now she is away in the arms of terrible destiny," This verse, SPEAKS IMMENSE VOLUMES OF PAIN.. Adding this gem to my fav list. Thanks
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Binoy Raveendran
Date: 9/15/2017 9:43:00 AM
Thanks Robert for visiting me, appreciation which you showers me matters a lot for me from such a big Respected poet
Date: 9/7/2017 6:46:00 PM
This sounds like a mother crying for her lost child. If I am reading it right, it is very, very powerful. Welcome to PS.
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Binoy Raveendran
Date: 9/10/2017 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Sunlite for visiting me and appreciating me thanks a lot
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