Cold

Cold seeps through my bones Without your arms to hold me. My heart feels the chill That even a sunny day Can not warm. Loneliness has a temperature All its own
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 7:46 AM
Oh, yes, I have felt this very same thing--I am sure many people have. You capture the mood perfectly. A good poem.
Knop Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 3:57 AM
So true, Francine! Lovely write with great affection!...Gert:)
Devonshire Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 12:31 PM
Yes indeed, Francine. Loneliness has a very chilling temperature. Guess you know what that's like too. A genuinely moving poem. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 6:42 AM
So touching Francine.. so lovely ..such emotional thoughts my friend.. loneliness has a temperature all its own.. how true.. this would make good contest theme luv.. amazing piece ..making it a favorite ...
Johnson Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 7:26 PM
Lovely cold Francine love your verse babe fixed me line ...changed him to me u r right...but im only a man :) But i will see you warm in my mind...love...Don
La France Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 8:06 AM
I have felt that "cold" that internal freeze many time ~~
Falotico Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 6:12 AM
I feel the yearning for love and togetherness in the heatfelt write...always Michael
Fillmore Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 12:18 PM
very emotional...feel this.
Foulk Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 10:50 AM
a most beautifulo and touching piece of poetry, and thank you for reading my two hearts came together and for your comment
K. Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 8:39 AM
can feel that chill, Francine! Very interesting way of putting it,of "loneliness having a temperature of its own" -- how true...
Mehta Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Li love the beautiful expression.. Loneliness has a temperature all its own. How true?, Francine
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