Cold-Blooded Business

You cut my heart out A surgical procedure ~ Never recovered

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/10/2019 10:03:00 AM

Oh, man ... I couldn't help but let rip a hearty chuckle. Me funny bone got gut kicked by this shrewd jag of sharp poetic wit. Bravo ... nicely done, Gershon! Love and more love always.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/10/2019 4:08:00 PM

Thanks for the love, Brother Fred! Cheers, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/10/2019 12:19:00 AM

Wow! I certainly hope this is FICTION!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/10/2019 4:08:00 PM

Yes, Caren, this one is fiction… but it's 'science fiction!' … LOL. Thanks, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/9/2019 9:33:00 PM

Good one, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/10/2019 4:07:00 PM

Thank you, Line! :) gw

Jenish Somadas

Date: 12/9/2019 9:21:00 PM

You should have selected the doctor wisely.. Now there are lot of tailors who knows how to stitch it well.. lol..Nice one...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/10/2019 4:07:00 PM

I knew I shouldn't have trusted that doc! -- Posthumously (LOL). Thanks, Jenish. ~ Gershon

Eve Roper

Date: 12/9/2019 7:03:00 PM

heard to heal a heart that is broken .. nice Senryu.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/10/2019 4:02:00 PM

So true, Eve. Thank you for your nice comment! Best wishes, Gershon