Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Coincidental Quirk

Why do I often get the shopping cart that doesn't work?
I swear, it is like some kind of coincidental quirk!
It is pulling me to the left with force as it moves,
Literally squealing like it has not wheels, but hooves!
I look like a drunk trying to get through the store,
Hurrying just to get a few things and get out the door!

Heidi Sands

12/19/18

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Tania Kitchin December 20, 2018 at 4:57 AM Ha ha, I can relate! Heidi Sands December 20, 2018 at 5:16 AM LOL. It seems a lot of people do relate. Maybe, they need to fix some carts or get some oil for the wheels lol :) Thanks for your comment!

Vijay Pandit December 19, 2018 at 2:35 PM Yes--it has happened to me..great observation, Heidi. Heidi Sands December 19, 2018 at 2:42 PM Yes, I guess we all have had it happen lol. The smaller carts are scarce at this store. I usually rush in and out anyway lol Thank you for your visit and comment :)

Joseph May December 19, 2018 at 2:07 PM I hate when that happens ..lol Heidi Sands December 19, 2018 at 2:41 PM Me too, especially when the smaller carts are hard to find lol

Mike Hauser December 19, 2018 at 1:25 PM Bahahaha! Heidi Sands December 19, 2018 at 1:33 PM LOL! :)

Nette Onclaud December 19, 2018 at 1:06 PM this makes me squirk, ohh... that cart has a mind of its own, heidi, lol... huggs Heidi Sands December 19, 2018 at 1:10 PM LOL. Yes, it does Nette. Thank you for your visit and comment :)

Chris Green December 19, 2018 at 12:25 PM That was funny and I hate when that happens. :) Especially when buying beer. You get home and open one and it sprays all over the place. :) Chris Green December 19, 2018 at 2:14 PM Sorry, I'm a Miller Lite guy. :) Heidi Sands December 19, 2018 at 12:52 PM LOL. Yes, it happens to me often! Budweiser by any chance?

M. L. Kiser December 19, 2018 at 11:47 AM That's the same cart I always get; that one and the one with the square wheel that goes...squeak...clop...squeak...clop...squeak...clop. Good one. Heidi Sands December 19, 2018 at 12:52 PM LOL Exactly M.L. I guess it isn't just me :) Thank you and have a nice day!

Kim Rodrigues December 19, 2018 at 11:39 AM Oh yes! We share the same cart! And in Hallmark last week with two young grands and they can’t find the price. Eventually I pull out my phone and pull it write up! Merry Christmas, Heidi! Heidi Sands December 19, 2018 at 12:51 PM Oh my word Kim! Thanks for your comment. Merry Christmas :)