Cocooned

With perfect obsession I shrink-wrap to your contours - cocooned; butterfly will never escape my mania. Susan Ashley July 21, 2017

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John Michaels

Date: 12/16/2017 5:33:00 AM

Lovely metaphorical write, Susan. All the best, John.

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/17/2017 1:06:00 PM

John, thank you for your wonderful comment. Your lovely thoughts are always so appreciated. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 12/14/2017 11:10:00 AM

This is beautiful, Susan...another example of fatal attraction. The first stanza strongly expresses how the 'victim' feels, straitjacketed. The second stanza describes the crazy hold that s/he manifests. ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/14/2017 6:20:00 PM

Paul, when I joined PS in July, there was a contest that got me thinking on this theme; 'Obsession'. Hence the creation of this write and also 'My Consuming Mania' and 'Physical Freak'. I'm delighted that you found this piece to be well done, your wonderful words are very encouraging to me always. Warmest Wishes ~Susan