Coconuts

Yummy coconuts 
Pina colada are smooth
 best matched with the beach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 9:55 PM
Aloha, Karen! Hmm, that soundly hits home! They chop the non-pointed end of green coconuts--their inner flesh is still loose, making it easier to peel off--then individually pour into the waiting opened coconuts filled with coconut juice, adding in the pineapple-y colada while still stirring, then serve the kids while adults add in the rum, and voila, welcome to my front and backyards. My compliments on your winning placement in Robert's contest, my friend! Aloha, William
Croft Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Sounds amazing. We have been going to a Pacific store here and fell in love with strawberry coconut milk!
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 9:24 PM
Back to say congrats on a win!
Croft Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 10:04 PM
Thank you!
Fowler Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 12:35 PM
I totally agree Karen! :)) Congratulations! :)
Croft Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 12:37 PM
Thank you
Goldsmith Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun Haiku  write. I Love this write. Have a great day writing away....................
Croft Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Thank you!
Jones Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 4:13 AM
Fun haiku!
Croft Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Thank you!
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