Coconuts

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Lets do the coconut strut,
Hard shell oh well,
As long as its nice inside,
Lets all dance with pride.

Oh, let's do the coconut strut, lets cheer,
Movements so smooth, it's better than cold beer.
We'll sway to the left, we'll sway to the right,
Our hips gyrating with all our might.

We'll shake our coconuts with style and grace,
Our feet tapping out a lively pace.
We'll twirl and spin, we'll dance and prance,
Feel too old? Just take a chance.

With each step, we'll feel the beat,
Coconuts leading the way, can't be beat.
We'll strut our stuff, and do it right,
All holding a coconut very tight.

So come on,  let's do the coconut strut,
Its an easy dance, open and shut.
So come on all, out of your huts,
And all give praise to COCONUTS!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 10/18/2023 12:31:00 PM
Love this fanciful dance Svvie - so refreshing! Congratulations my sweet friend! :)
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Date: 10/19/2023 10:33:00 PM
So sorry for the delay in replying. My heartfelt thanks for your wonderful comment. SV
Date: 10/18/2023 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A very creative/fun write. Can you show us this fun coconut dance??? I Have a great day writing away....................
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Date: 10/19/2023 10:38:00 PM
Cheeky ! :) Thanks for your terrific comment ! SV
Date: 10/9/2023 6:24:00 PM
Fun! Would love to see the coconut strut live. Lol
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Date: 10/19/2023 10:37:00 PM
T'was fun writing it, but umm I think dancing it is beyond me these days. Thanks for you fun comment. Enjoyed SV
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