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Coconut Cake

Coconut Cake Sometime there’s things I like to make But I’ll always buy a Coconut Cake In a box so neat and square It’s white and light and filled with air Melts in your mouth with cup of tea And it’s not made by Sara Lee. I take a slice, then just one more The next I know I’ve totaled four I walk away, with still some left It calls my name till I am deaf And so I say “Oh what’s the harm?” This coconut cake by Pepperidge Farm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/13/2010 8:17:00 AM
Great ad for Pepperidge Farm. Great write about a great topic epicurean. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/11/2010 3:04:00 PM
Sounds yummy.Hope all is well with you.Did you check out the last 2 postings I have done?Chat more later.
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Date: 2/11/2010 1:49:00 PM
mmm yummy!!!! Do I hear you! Light & Love
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Date: 2/10/2010 9:01:00 AM
I encourage you to continue writing Jeralynn. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2010 7:03:00 AM
Someone should make a recipe book with poems like these!! a YUMMY read. Luv, andrea
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Date: 2/10/2010 4:36:00 AM
What a fine job you've done with Coconut Cake, Jeralynn. Had me smiling all the way to the last tasty morsel. Why do I feel like I have to have a cold glass of milk? I don't even like milk! Ahhh the power of the pen! :) thank for sharing your desert.-Robert
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Date: 2/9/2010 4:40:00 PM
Adorable Jeralynn.. did u save a piece for later? ..yummy yummy .. a wonderful write ... filled with delicious description.. luv.. and thankxxx for sharing and for your always poetic comments... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/9/2010 3:11:00 PM
Strange where we get our inspirations for writing. Loved this write.
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