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***This, the sequel to my "Cocktail Lounge Debut".. A better understanding will come if the first poem is read.... Details flood, organized his mind. Cocky, overconfidence looms. He is the feature poet tonight. Famed now, the crowd roars. A vacation from all their daily chores. Three stories to read ReAdY.. Steady, no trembling, he's ready. His name "Asavvy1" Called over-head, cheering, applauding, inspiringly led. Feeding off his words, He feeds off their silence. He knows they feel him, they love his diligence. Jared Pickett 10/14/09 Asavvy1

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/17/2009 2:57:00 AM
Jared, what a buzz it would be to be applauded after a live reading, i concur with Catie. It would be koolio >> James
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Date: 10/14/2009 12:07:00 PM
nicely written, thanks for your comments on my works...
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