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Flowing down his cheek, perfusly, sweat. His attitude bleak, confusedly windswept In surround sound, his name, his call to fame. So many stories, poetry tales. "Loves Mystical Fable" Limited only one, NerVouS. He walks with pride, head up. Composed in his confidence. His breath on display, amplified. His voice starts in disarray, terrified. Takes a deep breath, okay!!!! Smooth. His voice crisp, words on point. The audience settles, a picture forms. Quieting the critic scorns. They felt him. he no longer feels meek. Inspired, by a standing ovation. A show again next week, he's hired Prepare for a mental vacation!!!!! ...........:JP)....7/09

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Date: 10/14/2009 12:13:00 PM
nicely penned, I would not know this kind of fame.
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Date: 7/26/2009 11:17:00 AM
Kool poem Jared, an artist with words>>James
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Date: 7/23/2009 12:48:00 PM
What an interesting perspective in this poem. I like the artistic presentation. Surprise ending! Thank you for sharing this piece with us and for your kind comments. Keep on writing! Have a nice day! Karen
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Date: 7/20/2009 7:53:00 PM
this is good. good job
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