Cobwebs

The beds are made and the kitchen clean But, oh those lousy cobwebs can be seen For the Couplet Challenge

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Shani Fassbender

Date: 10/2/2011 6:22:00 PM

HAHA - how true!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2011 12:57:00 PM

Not only can they be seen, dear LNC, but they're usually out of reach! Dadgum spiders pick the highest places. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2011 10:30:00 AM

Good morning and congratulations on your win in Susan's "Couplet Challenge" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2011 11:16:00 PM

GREAT job with this one, Barbara. All the winners were awesome. Congratulations.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/25/2011 4:08:00 PM

This is a fantastic write Barbara! I dislike cobwebs too, always means there is a spider nearby, I hate spiders! But I really like your poem a lot! Great work!!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/24/2011 11:54:00 PM

This is super and so very true. Thanks BG for your comments. It just made my day.