Cobwebs

The beds are made and the kitchen clean
But, oh those lousy cobwebs can be seen


For the Couplet Challenge
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fassbender Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 6:22 PM
HAHA - how true!
Devonshire Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 12:57 PM
Not only can they be seen, dear LNC, but they're usually out of reach! Dadgum spiders pick the highest places. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 10:30 AM
Good morning and congratulations on your win in Susan's "Couplet Challenge" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:16 PM
GREAT job with this one, Barbara. All the winners were awesome. Congratulations.
Sivey Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 4:08 PM
This is a fantastic write Barbara! I dislike cobwebs too, always means there is a spider nearby, I hate spiders! But I really like your poem a lot! Great work!!
Mannan Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 11:54 PM
This is super and so very true. Thanks BG for your comments. It just made my day.
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