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Cobblestones of Quicksand

cobblestones of quicksand tapestries of oil teardrops of marble left out to boil fingerprints of tree sap diamonds of wood ceilings of water - not what it should sea breeze of fire windmills of stone whispering of evergreens as I stand alone

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Jon Arno

Date: 12/15/2011 3:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning entry Jon

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/15/2011 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved first place. As Debbie said, great imagery.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/15/2011 6:25:00 AM

wow what cool imagery!! and i do love the wrap up ending Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2011 5:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Twelve" contest J. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/15/2011 4:59:00 AM

This poem takes me to a never never land...imaginative and loaded with unusual images..Congrats on this home run win. Gwendolen

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/15/2011 3:51:00 AM

Congratulations and happy forthcoming holidays x

Michael Smith

Date: 11/27/2011 10:05:00 PM

Very colorful.

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/18/2011 2:22:00 AM

I love the flow in this work J.. it glides of the tongue like syrup. I think I'll pop this in my favorites to read again...well done...Margaret

Kash Poet

Date: 11/10/2011 6:32:00 AM

Congrats J.Dover on your 1st place win with this interesting write.Enjoyed.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/9/2011 4:27:00 PM

Congrats on a fantastic first place win J. Dover ..luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/9/2011 7:23:00 AM

Interesting in the extreme and rythmic in form. Congratulations on your big win. Love. Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2011 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest J. Love, Carol