Cobbler Treat

Peaches hot and bubbly
under a sweet crust
baked on a cold winter day
oozing perfection
with whip cream to top ...
Serve it hot ...
Aaaah!



for Laura's Sweet Treat contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 11:29 AM
superwonderfully fun and delicious! Jim
Spence Sr Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Hello Sue, this piece flows well; however, the form is 7/5/7/5/5/3/1. Check it again. This would be great. I can taste the crust with ice cream on top. Great job! ~Joseph
Moreno Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 6:41 PM
Sounds good in this delicious write...Raul
Ginn Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 5:42 PM
Finally one that's my favorite. I think cobblers are the best and it really doesn't matter what flavor. You've inspired me to do something I shouldnt lol.
Hammer Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 5:31 PM
My mouth is watering. What a treat to read!
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March 7, 2009 at 5:11 PM
Oh yum! I love peach pie and with whip cream it is truly a perfection. I'll take a piece. Nice job with this challenging form. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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