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Cobbler Treat

Peaches hot and bubbly under a sweet crust baked on a cold winter day oozing perfection with whip cream to top ... Serve it hot ... Aaaah! for Laura's Sweet Treat contest

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/20/2009 11:29:00 AM

superwonderfully fun and delicious! Jim

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 3/15/2009 12:57:00 PM

Hello Sue, this piece flows well; however, the form is 7/5/7/5/5/3/1. Check it again. This would be great. I can taste the crust with ice cream on top. Great job! ~Joseph

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/10/2009 6:41:00 PM

Sounds good in this delicious write...Raul

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/7/2009 5:42:00 PM

Finally one that's my favorite. I think cobblers are the best and it really doesn't matter what flavor. You've inspired me to do something I shouldnt lol.

Irene Hammer-Mclaughlin

Date: 3/7/2009 5:31:00 PM

My mouth is watering. What a treat to read!

Date: 3/7/2009 5:11:00 PM

Oh yum! I love peach pie and with whip cream it is truly a perfection. I'll take a piece. Nice job with this challenging form. Good luck in the contest. Karen