Cobbler Cobbler Mend My Shoe

Tim was nineteen years old, getting ready to go to university,
His parents had organised his accommodation 
A house for students, roomy, very near to outskirts of city,
His friends shared all costs, ready for their future education.
Tim went through his things at home very carefully,
Took his favourite clothes, guitar, and some trinkets,
Excitedly, finished his packing, when almost voluntarily,
A yellowish old small paper fell into his homemade biscuits.
 It was an old receipt from a cobbler dated years ago, February 
1959 Eloff Street Johannesburg, close to the University,
Tim threw it into his case, keen to keep this, for it was history,
The signature was his grandfathers who died last year, Fre Hitty.
But Tim and his friends for now, only thinking of girls and party times,
Tim decided to go into the city, had to buy books and stationery,
The bottle store first, beers, a party this Saturday, amongst the vines.
However, next to the store Tim saw a shop which looked rather eyrie.
There was a sign, Cobbler, arrows pointing up a dark passage and stairs,
‘Cobbler’s Place’, written at top of receipt that he pulled out of his pocket,
Yes, goodness me, this place does still exist, an old man holding two pairs
Of shoes appeared, easily almost ninety, Tim handed him the docket.
The old man took it, slowly walked to the back through a narrow door,
After a good half an hour he returned with a smile on his weathered face,
Well, if you pop in tomorrow at the same time, your shoes will be ready, 
Cost of living has gone up since my youth, you must now pay more than a penny.
No problem Sir replied Tim, but amazing is that the shoes are not ready,
All the way back from 1959, seeing that your shop and your work still exist,
Yet i still have to collect them tomorrow, may i have my grandfathers Freddy's
Shoes back please, no but the old man began to say, Sir Tim said, I do insist.



Apologies to all but i left out my last four most precious meaningful lines, i have now attached them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 10/21/2022 11:40:00 AM
poetry like this always gives hope and has a lesson in it for us if we take the time to read. Our fruit trees are in full blossom in our yard promising a good yield of peaches and nectarines this year. Our 3 year old grandson is starting to help me in the garden. I have been introduced to the art of making sourdough bread, and using the spent sourdough to make wonderful scones. Take care David in NZ
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Date: 9/8/2022 4:26:00 PM
Hello Jennifer. I turned to this entry because of the title. I am hard on my shoes and go through many shoes thus I had to turn the page. This story is quite fascinating all the way to the end. Truly. You were very creative within this entry. Thank you for sharing your talent. Have a wonderful night. Blessings always
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Date: 9/3/2022 12:51:00 PM
I truly enjoyed this narrative in rhyme, Jenny. Those shoes are worth much more than the rise of cost of living. ~ Warm regards & Hugs, my friend // paul
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Date: 8/30/2022 5:20:00 PM
A charming story poem, told only as you can tell it. Love reading your love of family shine through in your words. Blessings and hugs ~ John
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Date: 8/21/2022 7:44:00 AM
A well rold story excellently penned Jennifer, Hope all is well with you, Have a blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 8/20/2022 5:53:00 AM
A great story written so beautifully. The twist done so masterfully. Blessings. ^__^JCB
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Date: 8/20/2022 3:39:00 AM
Creative work. Enjoyed reading it. Back to 1959 is a long time to continue holding a pair of shoes. Longer than I have been married. Sara
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Date: 8/19/2022 9:46:00 AM
Great story... I hope you are doing well Jennifer.. Prayers
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Date: 8/17/2022 10:39:00 PM
A very interesting story, Jenn ! What an accidental coincidence of meeting the old cobbler after years ! As ever, your story telling talent stands out ! An old pair of shoes of the grandfather has so much of sentimental value!
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Date: 8/16/2022 8:13:00 PM
Growing up in an era, where there were cobbler shops, my great grandfather being one, i hold this poem must dear, Jennifer. Love the story, and to my favourites it goes.
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Date: 8/16/2022 4:00:00 AM
So very authentic and so reflective with such pragmatic lines, truly poetry is the medium of catharsis, you verse is the truest example of this and also the way the matter has been invoked with the great storyline is truly praiseworthy from all the aspects.
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Date: 8/15/2022 4:07:00 AM
You are a great story teller Jennifer, I enjoyed the read
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Date: 8/14/2022 8:49:00 PM
Wonderfully written Jennifer, inflation is there also...
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Date: 8/14/2022 2:45:00 PM
Fantastic story telling Jennifer, it’s alarming how the cost of living is rising by the day, no mistake lives are at stake… Belle
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Date: 8/14/2022 12:26:00 PM
Jennifer, you have a gift for telling stories and are quite talented at it. It is terrifying to see how the cost of everything has skyrocketed, plunging many people into destitution. Indeed, the talent you have for creating such fantastic tales, my friend, is quite pertinent to the events of the present day. The standard of living is getting steadily worse all across the world, which is having a negative impact on the lives of a significant number of people.
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Date: 8/14/2022 12:41:00 AM
You're a great story teller Jennifer, it's frightening how everything has risen in price and forcing many into poverty. Tom
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Date: 8/13/2022 8:28:00 PM
A penny for the cobbler's thoughts... Wonderful narrative, Jennifer. :) gw
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Date: 8/13/2022 2:27:00 PM
Great story telling my friend and it is so relevant to what is happening today... the cost of living I the UK is very bad and is ruining a lot of peoples lives..
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