Coaxed By a Stranger

She hid her talents in the deepest darkest recessed corner
Taking it out never, for fear of being called brilliant.
She did not want to be shunned or ostracized, 
Knowing her people well

Then one day she met a stranger who coaxed her a tiny bit
Encouraged her to allow herself to be
She shook out one sliver of a slip of a talent
And began to glow, and began to grow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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December 5, 2020 at 2:51 PM
I am glad there are strangers in this world to coax, prod and or pull us out of our shells ... self imposed or otherwise. Lots of simple, well put images in this poem of yours. Thanks.... GINSU-KNIFE EASTPORT, MAINE USA
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December 6, 2020 at 6:39 AM
Thank you so much Patrick. It is fun to look back and realize what so many people have seen in me that I never would have seen for myself.
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Sadly that some are afraid to bloom. Nicely written , Caren. Hugs Eve
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November 9, 2020 at 2:21 PM
It is so sad but accurate in many cases.
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November 9, 2020 at 8:35 AM
So glad this happened and how a stranger can inspire someone to bring out their talent..
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November 9, 2020 at 2:21 PM
Sometimes strangers are angels.
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November 8, 2020 at 7:04 PM
Beautiful... many an unhappy life is lead all because we think of others. A fav for me! Rama
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November 9, 2020 at 2:21 PM
Thank you Rama
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