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Coaxed By a Stranger

She hid her talents in the deepest darkest recessed corner Taking it out never, for fear of being called brilliant. She did not want to be shunned or ostracized, Knowing her people well Then one day she met a stranger who coaxed her a tiny bit Encouraged her to allow herself to be She shook out one sliver of a slip of a talent And began to glow, and began to grow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 12/5/2020 2:51:00 PM
I am glad there are strangers in this world to coax, prod and or pull us out of our shells ... self imposed or otherwise. Lots of simple, well put images in this poem of yours. Thanks.... GINSU-KNIFE EASTPORT, MAINE USA
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/6/2020 6:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Patrick. It is fun to look back and realize what so many people have seen in me that I never would have seen for myself.
Date: 11/9/2020 10:38:00 AM
Sadly that some are afraid to bloom. Nicely written , Caren. Hugs Eve
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2020 2:21:00 PM
It is so sad but accurate in many cases.
Date: 11/9/2020 8:35:00 AM
So glad this happened and how a stranger can inspire someone to bring out their talent..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2020 2:21:00 PM
Sometimes strangers are angels.
Date: 11/8/2020 7:04:00 PM
Beautiful... many an unhappy life is lead all because we think of others. A fav for me! Rama
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2020 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Rama

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