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Cmon 5 Oclock

How can it be that hours creep so yet years swift passage totally blows my mind? The babes are absorbing Aristotle, integrating, no more needing hands held while crossing nor other mom bossing. Frequently tossing my glance to the minute hand barely budging thought occurs playfully charmingly nudging… Yep, weekends are great for baking and rest yet each now of this moment just could be the best ever known, so change mind blown and let it be shown that life for the weekend ain’t much to speak of when up against live for the day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/19/2011 5:22:00 AM
We learn that, don't we? Thank you for putting it so well. E.J.
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:00:00 PM
Insightful piece, my friend - as you say, we should all live for today (for tomorrow may not come).
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:52:00 AM
A brilliant piece this is NJ. I love the message conveyed, life is to be lived each day. Wonderful lines. Thanks for stopping by my poems, your comments are welcome.
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Date: 9/16/2011 3:21:00 PM
A wonderful picture of yours ( especially liked bossing crossing tossing ) as usual -- exactly what I expected.....it says pretty much what I was saying in "NO END" (written today) except yours is so much fun and bouncy and mine is a bit too serious +mushy but wh o cares? thats me Nance....best wishes Syd
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:06:00 PM
Scientists say time bends; I wish it would bend my way. You need some time off so you can write more fine poetry.
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Date: 9/16/2011 12:44:00 PM
time oh time, I just read another poem about time and how every second must be filled with something to make good use of it! IN other words, the same message as this fine poem has aptly given us!
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Date: 9/16/2011 12:35:00 PM
Times does pass so slowly, yet it does creep upon us. Sometimes I seem to run out of time and then at times I have not enough of time. You have penned a very interesting poem here. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Jancarl
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Date: 9/16/2011 12:33:00 PM
Time is such a mystery, love this Nancy, awesome poem. harry
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