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Clutching at Straws I clutched a straw albeit one for me that is quite more than enough for I be just one It skews in my hand caused by the grasp of it hope its release beckons a recall of its former self Alas, not nearly as close but far worse for where it bends was a tear So now I'd be ready this rarest thing that I do as I gingerly grasped more then all of the straws Clutching them unbeknownst to me hails a slightly older kid in need of a straw Looks puzzled at first till his inner brows met his nose and the outer rosed up Without fail I replaced all save one in the empty jar and slowly began to retreat When suddenly a hand reached from behind me and yanked the straw I held Defensive training consumed me as I roundhouse kicked him to a penitent pose Again with a puzzled and now dazed look he returned to me my unaffected sturdy straw He tells his friends no more will he be grasping at straws there Then I turned and grinned imagined a lesson I received for the result of that moment I was unlearnt in defense and it had finished adversely against me 2020 September 26 *2nd Place* Clutching at Straws ~~Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 10/6/2020 10:32:00 AM
- It should be enough for everyone ... :))) - Congratulations on your great second place in the contest, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thanks for your kindness, Anne-Lise, Aloha! William
Date: 10/6/2020 10:20:00 AM
Long Lovely Poem. Congrats to win. Blessing
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Date: 10/6/2020 10:32:00 AM
Grateful thanks, Anisha, Aloha! William
Date: 10/6/2020 6:04:00 AM
Back to say congratulations William! Aloha Linda
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Date: 10/6/2020 10:33:00 AM
Thanks for your kind return, Linda, Aloha! William
Date: 10/6/2020 5:05:00 AM
Congrats to you... This is a great write. Love it. God bless you
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Date: 10/6/2020 10:35:00 AM
Appreciate your blessed words, Regina, Aloha! William
Date: 9/26/2020 6:18:00 AM
This is delightful William. Such a twist on the usual! GL in the contest! Linda
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Date: 9/26/2020 10:55:00 AM
I am glad you enjoyed it and the encouragement, Linda, Aloha! William

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