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Cluster of Teardrops

Cluster of teardrops Growing a hundred folds Drowning the beauty of the soul Soaking all of the heart's gold Turning a rusty old mold When you lose view of the road. Cluster of teardrops Inflating the trembling frame Rendering the mind maimed Unable to break away Not sure which is the way When another is to blame. Cluster of teardrops Rushing so cold through the veins Paralyzing the compulsive brain Unable to think straight Under the darkened day For your love has been taken away. Cluster of teardrops Needing to unload its weight Looking out for a way To let the world know your pain When you see another can gain And your love is found again. Cluster of teardrops Feeling the warm current Offering the soul salvation The heart a new emotion The mind a revelation As you let in the shining sun. By CarolineCécile, June 8, 2009.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/20/2010 12:39:00 PM
Many congrats on your wonderful piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/19/2010 7:26:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, congrats on your well deserved feature. keep writing. Your poetry friend Adeleke
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Date: 1/19/2010 6:05:00 AM
Beautiful transformation. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 1/18/2010 12:55:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Caroline >> James
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Date: 1/18/2010 3:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Caroline. I hope you have many more. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2010 11:54:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Caroline.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/17/2010 9:38:00 PM
Congratulations Caroline on being featured. A truly heart tugging piece and beautifully written. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:34:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem on Soup this week... wonderful write... am on jury duty for the next week so will be back full steam after this week is over.. enjoyed.. this write... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/17/2010 7:06:00 PM
great poem featured this week
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Date: 6/12/2009 7:48:00 PM
Ps. "Keep Writing Caroline~'You' Are A Blessing I Believe!!!:):) ~
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Date: 6/12/2009 7:47:00 PM
Smile~I really admire and love writers like "You Gifted Caroline"~For often You seem to set aside Yourself in hopes and desires to touch and help anothers life....And there is not much more beautiful than a soul such as this!! Thus, my hat is off to "You," for "Your Wonderful Heart & Soul" again!!:):)~And, "You Are A Bright Light" I can tell~Again, "My Love & Warmth To You & Your Loves, John!!:):) Smile, Bye ~
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Date: 6/12/2009 4:02:00 AM
Wonderful poem again Caroline, can't wait to read the others you unleash>>James
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Date: 6/12/2009 12:26:00 AM
felt like i was swimmin in rhyme n tears, hope to read more of you...
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