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Clumsy Aquarius

Aquarius met Belle from France Attracted he asked for a dance The first was a slow He stepped on her toe Did he deserve a second chance?

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/14/2015 1:36:00 PM

Yes a second chance! Cute write. Hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 4/29/2015 3:20:00 PM

Thank you, Cecilia! Hope things are well on your side of the fence:) hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/17/2015 12:15:00 PM

Dear Paul, I would definitely have given him a second chance. Encore! - as others have suggested. Maybe she steps on your toe in the sequel. LOL Very funny, my friend. Love, Carolyn PS- My John was a "clumsy Aquarius." You should have seen him try to ice skate!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/17/2015 12:56:00 PM

Dear Carolyn, thank you for the lovely comments! Dancing is one thing...ice skating is another! Never had the opportunity to go ice skating; my friend did, and sprained his wrist! I bet you are good at it. Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/13/2015 9:19:00 AM

I agree with Poesy and Olive and Andrea and Bindu and Julia and Theresa and Eileen. Now you need to write about the second dance *lol*

Paul Callus
Date: 3/13/2015 9:39:00 AM

Seems like there will be a second dance! I will have to watch out for the two dancers...then we'll take it from there:) // paul

Poesy Relish

Date: 3/11/2015 3:35:00 PM

Of course he deserves a second chance... nad

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2015 5:55:00 PM

Thank you Nadiya....the 'yes' vote is overwhelming:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/11/2015 1:55:00 PM

another chance another chwnce!!! :D

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2015 5:54:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi!! Another chance it shall be:) Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/11/2015 1:56:00 PM

hugs dearie Paul... :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/11/2015 10:58:00 AM

Paul, check out my "Absolutely No Malice" which I posted yesterday! It's just a silly wee limerick about your exploits! LOL! Love your wee limerick here! Cheers!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2015 11:43:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by Jack! Thank you also for the witty Limerick/s which I much enjoyed:) All the best my friend. // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/11/2015 5:57:00 AM

A nice pen Paul! Enjoyed your Limerick, my dear friend. Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2015 11:44:00 AM

So pleased that you enjoyed it, Dorian. Thank you for another lovely visit:) hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2015 6:31:00 PM

I say he deserves another chance. Very cute one.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2015 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Andrea; I'll pass on the message:) // paul

Julia Ward

Date: 3/9/2015 7:47:00 AM

Yep, he deserves a second chance. Hugs, Julia, xx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/9/2015 9:01:00 AM

I am glad you're in favour of a second chance, Julia:) Hugs // paul

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/8/2015 3:39:00 PM

Dear Paul I'm glad you like my pain of the night poem, I believe life is a balancing between light and dark, the shades that pace in between are accents of beauty remaining to be seen by the eyes of the observant, the artist, the poet, and ones with the minds to ponder the deep thoughts of humanity, cheri

Paul Callus
Date: 3/9/2015 9:38:00 AM

I like your reasoning, Cherl. We poets are lucky to have access to what lies beyond the outer layers! // Enjoying you Easter posts:) // paul

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/8/2015 3:34:00 PM

Dear Paul, All of us Aquarian's love to dance this is very true my poetic friend, give us a waltz and watch out, but please be kind to our feet remember some us have boo boos, I enjoyed this write of yours my friiend, cheri

Paul Callus
Date: 3/9/2015 9:03:00 AM

Hi Cherl! There was a time when I enjoyed dancing, but have not been to a proper dance for ages; don't worry, I would watch out for your toes:) Have a nice day. // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/7/2015 4:02:00 PM

:) Always a second chance. Hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 3/7/2015 4:17:00 PM

Thank you, Eileen:) A 'sore subject' but forgiveness is always much appreciated! Hugs // paul [will be back to you...]

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 2:30:00 PM

NO! lol made me chuckle Paul :-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 3:11:00 PM

I value my toes! Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/7/2015 3:10:00 PM

Hi Jan...glad I elicited a chuckle...good sign. And I was hoping for a YES! :) Hugs // paul