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Clumsy Aquarius

Aquarius met Belle from France
Attracted he asked for a dance
The first was a slow
He stepped on her toe
Did he deserve a second chance?

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Cecilia Macfarlane

April 14, 2015 at 1:36 PM

Yes a second chance! Cute write. Hugs

Paul Callus

April 29, 2015 at 3:20 PM

Thank you, Cecilia! Hope things are well on your side of the fence:) hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

March 17, 2015 at 12:15 PM

Dear Paul, I would definitely have given him a second chance. Encore! - as others have suggested. Maybe she steps on your toe in the sequel. LOL Very funny, my friend. Love, Carolyn PS- My John was a "clumsy Aquarius." You should have seen him try to ice skate!

Paul Callus

March 17, 2015 at 12:56 PM

Dear Carolyn, thank you for the lovely comments! Dancing is one thing...ice skating is another! Never had the opportunity to go ice skating; my friend did, and sprained his wrist! I bet you are good at it. Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

March 13, 2015 at 9:19 AM

I agree with Poesy and Olive and Andrea and Bindu and Julia and Theresa and Eileen. Now you need to write about the second dance *lol*

Paul Callus

March 13, 2015 at 9:39 AM

Seems like there will be a second dance! I will have to watch out for the two dancers...then we'll take it from there:) // paul

Poesy Relish

March 11, 2015 at 3:35 PM

Of course he deserves a second chance... nad

Paul Callus

March 11, 2015 at 5:55 PM

Thank you Nadiya....the 'yes' vote is overwhelming:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

March 11, 2015 at 1:55 PM

another chance another chwnce!!! :D

Paul Callus

March 11, 2015 at 5:54 PM

Hi Olive_eloi!! Another chance it shall be:) Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

March 11, 2015 at 1:56 PM

hugs dearie Paul... :)

Jack Ellison

March 11, 2015 at 10:58 AM

Paul, check out my "Absolutely No Malice" which I posted yesterday! It's just a silly wee limerick about your exploits! LOL! Love your wee limerick here! Cheers!

Paul Callus

March 11, 2015 at 11:43 AM

Thank you for stopping by Jack! Thank you also for the witty Limerick/s which I much enjoyed:) All the best my friend. // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter

March 11, 2015 at 5:57 AM

A nice pen Paul! Enjoyed your Limerick, my dear friend. Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Paul Callus

March 11, 2015 at 11:44 AM

So pleased that you enjoyed it, Dorian. Thank you for another lovely visit:) hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

March 10, 2015 at 6:31 PM

I say he deserves another chance. Very cute one.

Paul Callus

March 11, 2015 at 11:06 AM

Thank you Andrea; I'll pass on the message:) // paul

Julia Ward

March 9, 2015 at 7:47 AM

Yep, he deserves a second chance. Hugs, Julia, xx

Paul Callus

March 9, 2015 at 9:01 AM

I am glad you're in favour of a second chance, Julia:) Hugs // paul

Cherl Dunn

March 8, 2015 at 3:39 PM

Dear Paul I'm glad you like my pain of the night poem, I believe life is a balancing between light and dark, the shades that pace in between are accents of beauty remaining to be seen by the eyes of the observant, the artist, the poet, and ones with the minds to ponder the deep thoughts of humanity, cheri

Paul Callus

March 9, 2015 at 9:38 AM

I like your reasoning, Cherl. We poets are lucky to have access to what lies beyond the outer layers! // Enjoying you Easter posts:) // paul

Cherl Dunn

March 8, 2015 at 3:34 PM

Dear Paul, All of us Aquarian's love to dance this is very true my poetic friend, give us a waltz and watch out, but please be kind to our feet remember some us have boo boos, I enjoyed this write of yours my friiend, cheri

Paul Callus

March 9, 2015 at 9:03 AM

Hi Cherl! There was a time when I enjoyed dancing, but have not been to a proper dance for ages; don't worry, I would watch out for your toes:) Have a nice day. // paul