Clumsy

Shards of glass scatter, reflecting light explodes, attention catches quickly, clumsiness exposed!

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Harry Horsman

Date: 5/2/2012 3:39:00 PM

this is excellent Katie, enjoyed. harry

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/23/2012 3:05:00 PM

you've nailed it in this succinct but very very good poem!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2012 10:52:00 AM

Been there and done that more than once in my life..I have those days that start of dropping things or bumping into things that last all day and I just hate it..Enjoyed reading your great work..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments give my spirit an uplifting moment..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/23/2012 5:52:00 AM

Yeah, I could definitely picture this happening Katie :) lovely imagery

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2012 5:43:00 AM

Well done and funny to - oxox Anne-Lise

Kathryn Collins

Date: 4/22/2012 9:31:00 PM

Dear Katie I love this. You've succinctly painted a picture of clumsiness with no clumsiness at all. Kathy