Clumsy

Shards of glass scatter,

reflecting light explodes,

attention catches quickly,

clumsiness exposed!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 3:39 PM
this is excellent Katie, enjoyed. harry
Bauer Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 3:05 PM
you've nailed it in this succinct but very very good poem!
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 10:52 AM
Been there and done that more than once in my life..I have those days that start of dropping things or bumping into things that last all day and I just hate it..Enjoyed reading your great work..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments give my spirit an uplifting moment..Sara
Neels Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 5:52 AM
Yeah, I could definitely picture this happening Katie :) lovely imagery
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Well done and funny to - oxox Anne-Lise
Collins Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 9:31 PM
Dear Katie I love this. You've succinctly painted a picture of clumsiness with no clumsiness at all. Kathy
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