Laura Leiser Poet Pleiades

Clueless

Clueless Clara chatters
   constantly, blurting out
      careless words that create
         chaotic confusion
      confounding most old folks
   causing them to quickly
close off their hearing aids.

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Paul Callus August 26, 2016 at 1:06 PM Quite a unique topic, Laura, tackled with a dose of humour! I like how it flows so smoothly. Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul

Kim Merryman August 26, 2016 at 12:06 PM Laura, I can just picture this scene. Hilarious! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 26, 2016 at 4:17 AM - Congratulations on your winning poems, Laura :) - hugs and :)

Kai Michael Neumann August 26, 2016 at 3:16 AM Chatter and hearing aids, I love that. Congratulations. That cheered me up this morning. Wishes, Kai

Viv Wigley August 26, 2016 at 12:34 AM Love the gentle humour in this, Laura, congratulations! Viv

Connie Marcum Wong August 25, 2016 at 9:48 PM Back to say Congratulations on your win Laura! 7 ; )

Sandra Haight August 25, 2016 at 7:25 PM Laura, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! I know someone like that! Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars August 25, 2016 at 5:18 PM Laura, congrats lovely lady :)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong August 25, 2016 at 1:34 AM I will bet this does very well in the contest Laura. It flows so smoothly all the time telling a story with a clever ending. ; ) 7 Laura Leiser August 25, 2016 at 3:05 PM Thanks, Connie! I'm glad you like it :)

Mark Anthony Cotterman August 24, 2016 at 5:43 PM Laura, this is a very clever and funny write! Adore it! Laura Leiser August 24, 2016 at 6:47 PM Thanks, Mark :D

Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2016 at 11:24 AM - Chaotic confusion ..... often :))) - A great one, Laura - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Laura Leiser August 24, 2016 at 12:18 PM Thanks, Anne Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell August 24, 2016 at 3:03 AM smashing piece Laura, really enjoyed it, blessings in the Lord, Gordon Laura Leiser August 24, 2016 at 12:17 PM Glad you liked this, Gordon :)

Andrea Dietrich August 24, 2016 at 12:23 AM LOVE LOVE LOVE it. Laura Leiser August 24, 2016 at 12:17 PM Thank you, Andrea :D

Viv Wigley August 23, 2016 at 10:57 PM Great, love it, and the little bursts of alliteration. Will do well, Laura. Viv x Laura Leiser August 23, 2016 at 11:31 PM Thanks, Viv! Glad you liked it:D