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Clueless

Clueless Clara chatters constantly, blurting out careless words that create chaotic confusion confounding most old folks causing them to quickly close off their hearing aids. Written on 8/23/2016 Pleiades

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Paul Callus
Date: 8/26/2016 1:06:00 PM
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Quite a unique topic, Laura, tackled with a dose of humour! I like how it flows so smoothly. Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/26/2016 12:06:00 PM
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Laura, I can just picture this scene. Hilarious! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/26/2016 4:17:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your winning poems, Laura :) - hugs and :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/26/2016 3:16:00 AM
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Chatter and hearing aids, I love that. Congratulations. That cheered me up this morning. Wishes, Kai
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/26/2016 12:34:00 AM
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Love the gentle humour in this, Laura, congratulations! Viv
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/25/2016 9:48:00 PM
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Back to say Congratulations on your win Laura! 7 ; )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/25/2016 7:25:00 PM
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Laura, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! I know someone like that! Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/25/2016 5:18:00 PM
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Laura, congrats lovely lady :)-luloo
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/25/2016 1:34:00 AM
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I will bet this does very well in the contest Laura. It flows so smoothly all the time telling a story with a clever ending. ; ) 7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/25/2016 3:05:00 PM
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Thanks, Connie! I'm glad you like it :)
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Mark Anthony Cotterman
Date: 8/24/2016 5:43:00 PM
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Laura, this is a very clever and funny write! Adore it!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/24/2016 6:47:00 PM
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Thanks, Mark :D
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2016 11:24:00 AM
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- Chaotic confusion ..... often :))) - A great one, Laura - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/24/2016 12:18:00 PM
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Thanks, Anne Lise :)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/24/2016 3:03:00 AM
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smashing piece Laura, really enjoyed it, blessings in the Lord, Gordon
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/24/2016 12:17:00 PM
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Glad you liked this, Gordon :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/24/2016 12:23:00 AM
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LOVE LOVE LOVE it.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/24/2016 12:17:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea :D
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/23/2016 10:57:00 PM
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Great, love it, and the little bursts of alliteration. Will do well, Laura. Viv x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/23/2016 11:31:00 PM
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Thanks, Viv! Glad you liked it:D

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