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Clueless

Clueless Clara chatters
   constantly, blurting out
      careless words that create
         chaotic confusion
      confounding most old folks
   causing them to quickly
close off their hearing aids.

Copyright © Laura Leiser | Year Posted 2016

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Paul Callus Date: 8/26/2016 1:06:00 PM Quite a unique topic, Laura, tackled with a dose of humour! I like how it flows so smoothly. Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/26/2016 12:06:00 PM Laura, I can just picture this scene. Hilarious! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2016 4:17:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning poems, Laura :) - hugs and :) Login to Reply

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 8/26/2016 3:16:00 AM Chatter and hearing aids, I love that. Congratulations. That cheered me up this morning. Wishes, Kai Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 8/26/2016 12:34:00 AM Love the gentle humour in this, Laura, congratulations! Viv Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/25/2016 9:48:00 PM Back to say Congratulations on your win Laura! 7 ; ) Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 8/25/2016 7:25:00 PM Laura, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! I know someone like that! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 5:18:00 PM Laura, congrats lovely lady :)-luloo Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/25/2016 1:34:00 AM I will bet this does very well in the contest Laura. It flows so smoothly all the time telling a story with a clever ending. ; ) 7 Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 8/25/2016 3:05:00 PM Thanks, Connie! I'm glad you like it :)

Mark Anthony Cotterman Date: 8/24/2016 5:43:00 PM Laura, this is a very clever and funny write! Adore it! Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 8/24/2016 6:47:00 PM Thanks, Mark :D

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/24/2016 11:24:00 AM - Chaotic confusion ..... often :))) - A great one, Laura - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 8/24/2016 12:18:00 PM Thanks, Anne Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 8/24/2016 3:03:00 AM smashing piece Laura, really enjoyed it, blessings in the Lord, Gordon Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 8/24/2016 12:17:00 PM Glad you liked this, Gordon :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/24/2016 12:23:00 AM LOVE LOVE LOVE it. Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 8/24/2016 12:17:00 PM Thank you, Andrea :D

Viv Wigley Date: 8/23/2016 10:57:00 PM Great, love it, and the little bursts of alliteration. Will do well, Laura. Viv x Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 8/23/2016 11:31:00 PM Thanks, Viv! Glad you liked it:D