Clueless

Clueless Clara chatters constantly, blurting out careless words that create chaotic confusion confounding most old folks causing them to quickly close off their hearing aids. Written on 8/23/2016 Pleiades

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2016 1:06:00 PM

Quite a unique topic, Laura, tackled with a dose of humour! I like how it flows so smoothly. Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/26/2016 12:06:00 PM

Laura, I can just picture this scene. Hilarious! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2016 4:17:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Laura :) - hugs and :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/26/2016 3:16:00 AM

Chatter and hearing aids, I love that. Congratulations. That cheered me up this morning. Wishes, Kai

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/26/2016 12:34:00 AM

Love the gentle humour in this, Laura, congratulations! Viv

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2016 9:48:00 PM

Back to say Congratulations on your win Laura! 7 ; )

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/25/2016 7:25:00 PM

Laura, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! I know someone like that! Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo

Date: 8/25/2016 5:18:00 PM

Laura, congrats lovely lady :)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2016 1:34:00 AM

I will bet this does very well in the contest Laura. It flows so smoothly all the time telling a story with a clever ending. ; ) 7

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/25/2016 3:05:00 PM

Thanks, Connie! I'm glad you like it :)

Mark Anthony Cotterman

Date: 8/24/2016 5:43:00 PM

Laura, this is a very clever and funny write! Adore it!

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/24/2016 6:47:00 PM

Thanks, Mark :D

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2016 11:24:00 AM

- Chaotic confusion ..... often :))) - A great one, Laura - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/24/2016 12:18:00 PM

Thanks, Anne Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/24/2016 3:03:00 AM

smashing piece Laura, really enjoyed it, blessings in the Lord, Gordon

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/24/2016 12:17:00 PM

Glad you liked this, Gordon :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2016 12:23:00 AM

LOVE LOVE LOVE it.

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/24/2016 12:17:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea :D

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/23/2016 10:57:00 PM

Great, love it, and the little bursts of alliteration. Will do well, Laura. Viv x

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/23/2016 11:31:00 PM

Thanks, Viv! Glad you liked it:D