Cloying

pink violet sky
scared hearts and horses 
thunder and run

Over the hills
chasing falling stars
twisted and spun

Blacker than midnight
porch light on
returning to what I have done
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August 1, 2025 at 3:34 PM
This I like very much! 'Cloying'...had to look that one up. Great word! I will be working this word in somewhere I can tell you. :) john
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