Premiere Contest WinnerClown At the Abyss

“Nobody likes a clown at midnight.”       Stephen King


CLOWN AT THE ABYSS


Darkroom abscessed 
with neon blush and black-blood —
sunken eyes look surprised
to find oneself in a dank dungeon.
Fecal stench, not humorous,
screams on each bold painted-on face.

“Are we dead?”

“When did I die?”

“I didn’t want to take along this honking nose! It never quits!”

“These humongous shoes, like flippers, so cold they grip!”

The clowns, their smiles and frowns,
continue to gripe in the big tent abyss.
The epic fail of their lives an applause
from the demons who have them in grip.

Like fools, they suppose, they can feel their way out.
They march in one straight line with clanging chains,
chortling, “Heigh Ho! Heigh Ho! It’s off to work I go!”*

You see, they can’t help being funny - never could.
So on they march clinging to claustrophobic walls.
Yet they, one by one, begin to notice no floor exists.

Squalid birds, their chains rattle and roll,
with cheap jokes that never cease.

“Take my wife…please.”

Rings through the air. The demons cackle and boo
their despair, occasionally deflating the roof of the tent
on their heads - it sticks to their gooey faces, causing
them to run out of hot air, go limp, confine their space

even more - no audience to exploit. When the roof rises
each one finds water caterwauled at their faces, then
strapped to a chair as sufferable makeup - acidophil -
leaks behind their eyes, into their pores, maliciously.

Clown at the abyss digs his nails into the soil, climbing
a mountain of ill will, always failing...falling, and then
the jokes hammer again...over and over, head over heels.

...head over heels,
                                      with no end…


2/27/2020
Clown at the Abyss Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann 

*Disney’s Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 1:50 PM
Hello Kim, clowns are not funny at night. Congrats on the win. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 1:42 PM
Hello Kim, oh it must have been an odd feeling sleeping in your daughter's room with the clown hanging from the ceiling. Enjoy your day my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 3:27 PM
Surely they’re not...lol! Slept in my daughter’s room one time. She had a clown hanging from the ceiling!
Agustin Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 3:49 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this truth (...always failing...falling, and then... with no end…) in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Thank you, sweet one!
Cornish Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 9:05 PM
This is epic Kim, well deserved honors
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Thank you so much, Craig!
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 6:59 PM
wow such a creative approach Kim no wonder you nailed the trophy win, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:53 PM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Warrior Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 5:54 PM
A masterpiece indeed Kimmy...very well executed dear friend...Congrats!! on First! place...stay safe and hibernate...The Wingster...^WW^ :o)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 8:53 PM
Thank you WW! You be safe too! Stay put!
Watt Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 1:38 PM
Wow, clown hell. You went deep with this one, Kim and were rewarded with a well-deserved #1 podium win. Enjoyed the read and the creative approach you took, as well as all the clown attributes. Congrats!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 5:23 PM
Thank you, John!
Neumann Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 1:28 PM
Congratulations on your masterpiece.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 5:23 PM
Thanks so much, Kai!
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 1:06 PM
- Woow, Kim .... really deserved your first place :) - Congratulations so much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 5:23 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Ligon Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 9:59 AM
Wow! Vivid descriptions and lots of drama and suspense. I can see why this is #1!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Thank you so much, Juliet!
Proxenos Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 9:13 AM
An Excellent write, I feel sorry for clowns ( wrote a poem a year or two back) -they just have to act like a joker, a happy pereson, even though the painted tears on their face are wipeed off by the real tears that flow! A definite win and a fav for me. Blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 9:15 AM
Is it posted? If so, what is the title? Hugs...Kim
Krutsinger Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 1:01 AM
This one has to be the top dog winner of this contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 9:15 AM
Woot woot! We will see. Love ya, my friend!
La France Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 9:34 PM
Kim, wow, your poem is amazing for the contest, this must be a winner _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 10:31 PM
Thanks so much, constance! :)
Lindley Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 11:20 AM
This is exceptionally creative and a great pleasure to read my friend. You have scored a hit wit this insightful dark piece. Wonderful ending as well.. A fav.... Good luck in the contest..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 6:49 PM
Thank you so much, Robert! :)
Green Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 10:59 AM
Wow, this was really good Kim. So creative and out there. It scared me. Best wishes in the contest. Love the Rodney Dangerfield nod. : )
Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 11:07 AM
Thanks! Phew...these take a lot out of you. I could not write a novel with so much dark. May God bless you with much love and light :)
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