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Cloudy Smoke Delusion (Aka Csd) Revised

I remember — WHEN We first kissed — YOUR Sweet lips plunged me into your — HEART’S Deepest pool — ON Into your embrace of — FIRE Caressing the sweet embers that were — YOU My heart ablaze in flames of passion that — MUST Have clouded all reason blinding me not to — REALIZE Breathless and gasping the perilous — SMOKE Burning and swirling everywhere — GETS Me lost in a maze to stray from your heart — IN A cruel twist of fate I stumbled loosing — YOUR Precious love never to see it again in your — EYES

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/28/2010 9:36:00 PM
I hadn't seen this one, Tom, and am really sorry things didn't work out. Now I am facing uncertainty in the future and wishing things had been different, but we can't live in the past. I guess we should just be thankful if we live at all. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/30/2010 10:46:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Thomas. I wish you a weekend full of love and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/29/2010 2:18:00 PM
Wow. This is very different, interesting. I like where you went with it though I truly wish it didn't end up that way. Great write.
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