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Cloudy Morning

cloudy morning--
in the rattle of dishes
last night's quarrel




       

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kash poet(kashinath karmakar)

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Casarah Nance

August 28, 2014 at 9:33 PM

Well done on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 27, 2014 at 6:02 PM

LOVE LOVE LOVE it. My personal fave so far. congrats.

Bl Devnath

August 27, 2014 at 2:11 PM

Ha Ha... lovely poem of acute observation. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Pandita Sietesantos

August 27, 2014 at 10:25 AM

Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Excellent, clever write! Pandita

Carrie Richards

August 27, 2014 at 9:41 AM

It is so good to see your name and your poetry again.....you have been missed, dear Kash! Thank you for keeping your spoon in the Soup !! And Thank you for your continued support! I hope you are finding time to write on the other site, ... ?? Let me know which one....I'd love to see what you are writing these days. Best wishes to you!

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 27, 2014 at 5:32 AM

Unpleasing picture of the kitchen in the morning, kash. congrats

Sara Kendrick

August 27, 2014 at 5:30 AM

Prodigious ...Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

August 26, 2014 at 9:43 PM

Hello Kash, Long time no see, :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~

Poet Destroyer A

January 14, 2014 at 11:58 AM

Kash,~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. [email protected] :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

November 11, 2013 at 8:55 PM

Excellent, Kash! You write these short forms so well, but then again, you write the long ones well, too! Big congrats on your first place win!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

November 9, 2013 at 10:18 AM

Nice little win Kash,,, hugs...LINDA

Sandra Adams

November 9, 2013 at 8:54 AM

love this one when I first read it...congrats on your win :)

Kim Merryman

November 8, 2013 at 5:49 PM

Fantastic senryu, Kash! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Skat A

November 7, 2013 at 11:00 PM

Kash, Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

November 7, 2013 at 7:14 PM

Kash, this is really outstanding !!

Barbara Gorelick

November 7, 2013 at 6:08 PM

Just the best! Congrats. BG

Juliet Ligon

November 7, 2013 at 4:16 PM

Creative perspective. Congrats, Kash!

Andrea Dietrich

November 7, 2013 at 3:29 PM

The most well deserved win in the lot, and it goes to KASH, king of haiku!! shine on, kash.

John Posey

November 7, 2013 at 1:15 PM

Well done.... Congratulations..... Jake

Connie Marcum Wong

October 30, 2013 at 12:34 AM

Oh Kash, this is so profound! Love it!

Andrea Dietrich

October 29, 2013 at 3:39 PM

HI, Kash, thanks for the comment on the poem I wrote about my stepbrother. I got two poems for him in just a month here, and all my life I could not even think of how to write about him in a poem!!