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Clouds Toching the Ground

Clouds drifting slowly in the sky, so fluffy and pure white, some small ones, some large ones, even round ones, just drifting away, then a gust of wind blows them downward, now we have clouds touching the ground. Written 6-21-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/27/2011 9:03:00 AM
Beautiful imagery James, very nicely penned indeed
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:15:00 AM
luv looking at clouds James and this poem has a lovely flow ..dreamy .. to make clouds a view to ponder my friend...
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Date: 6/26/2011 4:22:00 PM
Nicely done my friend. There is not much as peaceful as watching the clouds. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/26/2011 10:47:00 AM
Lovely write, James. I used to love the ones that resembled things when I was a kid : )
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Date: 6/26/2011 8:34:00 AM
this has awesome imaginary i like it. cory
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Date: 6/25/2011 9:57:00 PM
oh, i like the flow of this, james... more, more!! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/25/2011 6:30:00 AM
Wonderful imagery here James...enjoyed very much.
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Date: 6/24/2011 9:31:00 PM
I've seen them like this, but touchinggrond high up in a hill! It's cool!!
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Date: 6/24/2011 1:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..I enjoy looking upward and watching the clouds..I can see so many different shapes, animals, and different pictures in the clouds...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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