Clouds of Grief

Clouds of grief





Warmth of rising sun, dissipates clouds of despair, a rainbow beguiles.





Written Jan 22nd, 2016
For contest "Monoku or one line poem #2"
Sponsor- PD A

Awarded 6th place win

Now entered for "Your best monoku poetry contest" by PD A
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 7:47 PM
so lovely. Congrats for your win.
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 11:53 AM
Reading this inspiring monoku and congratulating you for the second time running, Upma! Well done! ~ Regards // paul
Devnath  Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 7:54 AM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
A   Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"
George   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Absolutely a beautiful and masterful Monoku. Elaine
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
George   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Wonder Monoku, Upma.
Nehal Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Congrats for win...
Haight Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Beautiful and inspiring, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 7:36 PM
I remember this one. Good to see it on the winners' list.
Callus Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:12 PM
An inspiring monoku, Upma; there is always hope of light after darkness. Congratulations on a very worthy win! Regards // paul
A  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 11:38 AM
DR UPMA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your monoku #2 win. xox ** SKAT **
Schmidt  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:42 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations to you:)
Selfa Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Perfectly done! :) Congratulations my friend. -hans
Haight Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Very uplifting Monoku, Dr. Upma. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Hlabisa Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Super congrats on an awesome win as well as your kind words
Muzzey Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write Upma! I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Cheema Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 6:40 AM
Congrats on your well deserved placement, Upma!
Whatley Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 6:24 AM
Excellent choice of words, Upma! Inspiring imagery conjured up with just one line.
A   Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 9:05 PM
DR UPMA, CONGRATS on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "I Can't Sleep" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 9:12 PM
I really like yours, Upma!!
May Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Vry nice write Dr Upma...
Sage Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 6:57 AM
nicely written monoku there...best of luck in the contest
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