Clouds of Grief

Clouds of grief





Warmth of rising sun, dissipates clouds of despair, a rainbow beguiles.





Written Jan 22nd, 2016
For contest "Monoku or one line poem #2"
Sponsor- PD A

Awarded 6th place win

Now entered for "Your best monoku poetry contest" by PD A
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 4/14/2016 7:47:00 PM
so lovely. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 4/14/2016 11:53:00 AM
Reading this inspiring monoku and congratulating you for the second time running, Upma! Well done! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/14/2016 7:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/13/2016 8:42:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:24:00 PM
Absolutely a beautiful and masterful Monoku. Elaine
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Date: 1/29/2016 4:46:00 PM
Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:59:00 PM
Wonder Monoku, Upma.
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:14:00 AM
Congrats for win...
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:39:00 AM
Beautiful and inspiring, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/27/2016 7:36:00 PM
I remember this one. Good to see it on the winners' list.
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:12:00 PM
An inspiring monoku, Upma; there is always hope of light after darkness. Congratulations on a very worthy win! Regards // paul
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:38:00 AM
DR UPMA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your monoku #2 win. xox ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/26/2016 10:42:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations to you:)
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Date: 1/26/2016 9:08:00 AM
Perfectly done! :) Congratulations my friend. -hans
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Date: 1/25/2016 5:55:00 PM
Very uplifting Monoku, Dr. Upma. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/25/2016 1:23:00 PM
Super congrats on an awesome win as well as your kind words
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Date: 1/25/2016 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write Upma! I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 1/25/2016 6:40:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved placement, Upma!
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Date: 1/25/2016 6:24:00 AM
Excellent choice of words, Upma! Inspiring imagery conjured up with just one line.
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Date: 1/24/2016 9:05:00 PM
DR UPMA, CONGRATS on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "I Can't Sleep" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/22/2016 9:12:00 PM
I really like yours, Upma!!
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Date: 1/22/2016 11:06:00 AM
Vry nice write Dr Upma...
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Date: 1/22/2016 6:57:00 AM
nicely written monoku there...best of luck in the contest
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