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Image: Cloud Fantasy, by Susan Lawrence On spring's green carpet I repose, revitalizing the soul passing slow minutes pondering the sky The lake whispers a morning meditation as memories abound of cloud fantasies a thousand ships of condensation dreams Assorted sizes, shifting shapes capriciously changing contours and colors white, dun, pewter gray, dusky purple magically mirroring my many moods Fleecy, flitting, tiny, quiet, wispy cirrus all alone like first day of school in a new town Thunderheads colliding with cold fronts hurling lightning in angry retribution resolute battleships storming towards war Stratus clouds, flat and unruffled soothing, like grandma holding a cookie sheet embracing landscapes like a comforting blanket hugging hilltops in a friendly fog Misting up at a feel good story spilling tears on the gloomiest of days A nimbostratus orchestra performing a symphony of snow for mountain dwellers a reverie of rain for desert denizens Bouffant hairdo like a 60's prom queen strutting across the sky adjusting her tiara cotton ball cumulus, billowy like a verbose uncle enhancing sunsets with colorful stories ..... The soul of the sky is Sol- our daylight and warmth, essence and marrow The stars are sky's artists painting our stories- archers, dippers, swans, seven sisters, scorpions, lions, hunters, heroes The heart of the sky is Luna- a nightlight for sleepy children a lamppost where lovers meet a lantern for the darkest of trails but clouds are the personality of the sky written 24 May, 2022 //Inspired by the wonderful art of PS member Susan Lawrence, after viewing her landscape paintings at susanlawrence.net. Each landscape is framed by a different personality of cloud; I encourage all to pay a visit to her website to enjoy her portraits and abstracts as well as landscapes ~ John//

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Date: 7/13/2022 6:12:00 PM
oh yes, I had read this one before. It's a really good one. Stronger for me than the Makeup poem. but it goes past the line limit, huh? That's too bad!
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John Watt
Date: 9/5/2022 12:37:00 PM
Thank you for helping me evaluate and compare, my friend!
Date: 7/5/2022 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A "Wonderful" write/story/picture. Love It. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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John Watt
Date: 7/5/2022 9:23:00 PM
Glad you liked this Paula, hope your day is going well ~ John
Date: 7/5/2022 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations. John Love your personifications in the this clever shapeshifter poem. Best, SuZ
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Date: 7/5/2022 9:22:00 PM
Thank you SuZ for the visit and kind remarks. I wish you all the best in the ongoing marathon ~ John
Date: 7/4/2022 10:35:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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John Watt
Date: 7/5/2022 12:04:00 AM
Thank you for the kind comment, sister. Grace and peace ~ John
Date: 6/3/2022 11:14:00 AM
John, I hesitated commenting until I could read and re-read your stunning poem wanting to drink in all of the deliciousness of your words. This rates along side your Starry Night poem for its magical poetic wonder. Thank you for sharing Susan's website. Can't wait to see her art. You are such a gift with poems of depth and spiritual anchors. I look forward to seeing this on a winners list sometime in the future. Gary was right when he said you have "surpassed" yourself. Grace and peace!
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Date: 6/27/2022 10:28:00 PM
Your mention of the Starry Night poem has caused me to wonder why I don't write more about great art. I am overwhelmed by your amazing encouragement for this one, and owe you my heartfelt gratitude. I hope you were able to visit and enjoy Susan's website. Grace and peace ~ John
Date: 6/2/2022 11:22:00 PM
Wow, this is just amazing! Your imagery captured the very heart of that fabulous painting. As a lover of landscape paintings , I will surely visit her website. Thank you John. Blessings.
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Date: 6/27/2022 10:24:00 PM
Thank you J, I know you won't be disappointed by a visit to Susan's site. Though this poem was inspired by her clouds, the landscapes are stunning, as are her portraits and abstracts.
Date: 5/29/2022 1:07:00 PM
This is a double delight: John you have surpassed yourself with this brilliant ekphrasis. It's just beautiful. I love it all but absolutely love how you finished it in the last 5 lines. Susan's work is equally brilliant. Susan, if you are reading this your abstracts, landscapes and portraits are fantastic. I would gladly pay to see your paintings curated in an exhibition. I'm no artist but I know what I like and enjoy. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 5/29/2022 9:32:00 PM
What a delightful comment to pass along to Susan, I will make sure she is aware of all the affirmation coming her way on this page. I will likewise pass along to her your brilliant ekphrasis poetic works. Thank you for the enthusiasm and kind support ~ John
Date: 5/29/2022 3:57:00 AM
Wow John! It is one of the nicest things one can do is to celebrate another’s gifts. I did not know Susan was also a gifted artist. Thank you for letting us know in this exquisite Ekphrasis. I adore art and I will certainly visit her website. Bravo my friend. A fave! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/29/2022 9:28:00 PM
I think you will really like her art Connie, and I'm happy you want to visit her site. You and Susan are huge fans of Mother Nature, which is revealed in her poetry and art. Thank you for the fave and constant stream of kindness. Hugs ~ John
Date: 5/27/2022 2:45:00 PM
John, this expansive poem has as many descriptive layers as the clouds themselves! Such a luxurious mix of artistic visuals and deeper, metaphorical meanings of Sol and Luna. Your poetry has grown more masterful over time..you are a great poet in my eyes! Another FAve! :)
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Date: 5/29/2022 9:23:00 PM
Laura, your eloquence speaks volumes and your support means the world to me. Thank you for the fave and for saying my poetry has grown, that is my desire. So many great poets to learn from here, yourself included. Hugs ~ John
Date: 5/27/2022 8:36:00 AM
Wow, John, you went all out with this one. Incredible visualization of sky and focus on clouds as its personality. Such creativity. Very well done, my friend.
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Date: 5/29/2022 9:19:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. You know your appreciation means an awful lot to me, my friend ~ John
Date: 5/27/2022 6:52:00 AM
Dear John , I am honored you have been so very inspired by my paintings ! Your cloud descriptions are luscious and full and imaginative and dreamy . It makes me want to fly in the sky and hover nestled within their magic ! So many wonderful descriptions here in this lovely poem . A fav ! Can’ t wait to read it again. Thank you for showcasing my work . Big hugs my friend , Susan :)
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Date: 5/29/2022 4:30:00 PM
Dear Susan, there is very little in life that fills my cup more than awesome art. I hope this gives a few more people a chance to see some inspired creations. Thank you for making this poem a fav, I am humbled and honored that you would. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs ~ John
Date: 5/27/2022 2:57:00 AM
I don't know who to compliment more....Susan or you ! John you have written an absolutely wonderful poem on Susan's skyscape painting.... ! She, in the first place is an outstanding poet. "Assorted sizes, shifting shapes capriciously changing contours and colors white, dun, pewter gray, dusky purple magically mirroring my many moods". I see it all .... ! Now she has proved herself to be a remarkable artist too...! Kudos to both
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Date: 5/28/2022 2:15:00 PM
Valsa, you may compliment Susan in bold colors, for her artistic and poetic talents, and for providing the inspiration for these words. Thank you very much for coming by to view and read; I am so grateful for your support and encouragement.
Date: 5/26/2022 6:36:00 PM
So much to take note of here, and to marvel at. I'll keep it short: 'wispy cirrus all alone, like the first day of school in a new town.' Your words resonate strongly in my heart, John, and the image thereby summoned is larger than life... so real. Thank you for this gem!! ~ Gershon
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Date: 5/28/2022 1:52:00 PM
I'm glad you got to enjoy a taste of Susan's art. She is multi-talented and deserves the credit for inspiring. Appreciate the kind words, my friend ~ John
Date: 5/26/2022 3:51:00 AM
Susan's painting really inspired you John, beautifully written verse. I love to watch the puffy clouds on a summers day and see the changing images. Susan not only a fine poet but a brilliant artist too. Will visit her website. Tom
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John Watt
Date: 5/28/2022 1:50:00 PM
Tom, I also love cloud watching. All you say about Susan is true. Thank you for the visit and kind comment, I trust all is well ~John

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