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Clouds, a Sunset and a Perfect Day

The sun casts it's glare on the lake. I'm laying in the grass staring into the sky, Watching the clouds as they form, Into animals of my mind. The warmth of the sun relaxes my soul, With you laying by my side, Our love glows within my heart. As the day lingers on into the lazy, Afternoon the sun disappears into the earth. Looking into the horizon the colors of the, Rainbow cascade across the top of the, Water creating a beautiful picture. A beautiful sunset to the, End of a perfect day.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/10/2022 3:32:00 PM

Hello Oklegirlrock, this sound like a romance. With the v=beautiful nature mixed in. I love it. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2022 5:31:00 AM

Hello Oklegirlrock, you are welcome. I would do the same. Or in a car going somewhere i look up to the sky to see the shape of the clouds. I like the seahorses, they look so gentile.Hugs.

Shirley Hudson
Date: 3/10/2022 10:10:00 PM

Thank you so much. I remember always laying in the grass looking at the clouds trying to see the different shapes and animals. I remember a tv series from BBC a character named Bea who looked up into the sky and seahorses. That was special and so romantic. Thank you for your kind words.