Clouds Lgt

CLOUDS LGT All created The same way: Either big or small, Short- or long-lived, Far- or little-traveled, Full of thunder and lightning Or giving quiet shade in the hot day, Flaming in borrowed colors at sundown. Final tears - then evaporation: All reborn the same way.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 2:11:00 PM

WOW, that's a powerful thought... Sidney, Congratulations, in Andrea's "Let's Get Technical contest:)" Loving life's how it goes.... LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/28/2014 1:44:00 AM

Very deep n thotful write Sidney! Congrats on top win!

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/27/2014 3:26:00 PM

Congrats on a beautiful win, Sidney, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/27/2014 2:26:00 PM

Such a gem........small poems are the ones that often meet the mark.......this one exceeds the mark by a long shot! :)

Sidney Beck
Date: 7/27/2014 2:34:00 PM

thanks Carrie...you are very kind.... i have been away from soup for about a year but I hope to be back for a good while from now on.....we will chat again...... my very best wishes....Syd

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/27/2014 1:01:00 PM

Beautifully written, Sidney, so concise, yet most expressive. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2014 12:16:00 PM

Sydney, so glad to see you entered a poem in my contest!! You must be very smart to KNOW what I LIKE. A short well crafted poem that is packed with meaning!! Congratulations on your second place in my contest. Loved the imagery too.