Clouds

Gently,wiping your way through
Moving calmly with your crew.
Looks as of a snowy,puffy,soft candy;
I would have got hold of you,
if you were handy.

Sometimes you used to make out some shape,
While, once I observed you as of a round tape.
The way you pass through the tress & buildings,
Gives me a visualization of wonderful settings.

I wonder how you would feel;
when drops of rain and the airplanes peel,
your tender body with their force!
I think you would definitely feel worse.
Or,May not be!

Whatever it is, my quest for you is,
Dear cloud, can I take a ride back of you?
And shout aloud with happiness, because of you...?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 4:37 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 4:20 PM
rohini perumal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 27, 2015 at 3:52 PM
ROHINI, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 12:11 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Rohini- I choose your first beautiful written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 6:15 AM
A wonderful thought...I really like it....Tim
Sathasivam Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 2:05 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Perumal Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 2:18 AM
THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT RAVI.
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