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See related image detail. Timelapse Video of Comming Storm Clouds in Lithuania, Stock Footage A Tanka made using a Lune Haiku's word count 3/5/3/5/5

clouds

cloud covered sun
heavy dew's sparkle quite subtle....
heavily falls quiet  
as the sun peaks through
hope lifts a broken spirit

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Pascal Borg

August 31, 2026 at 3:23 PM

Enjoyable little write, Sara. I also enjoy reading your comments to the comments you receive. Getting to know you a little better.

Sara Kendrick

August 31, 2026 at 5:12 PM

Pascal, interesting that you would read a little more to get to know me better. Thank you for the nice review. 👍⭐. Sara K.

I Am Anaya

August 29, 2026 at 7:47 AM

Inspiring lune, Sara! Blessings 🕊️

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2026 at 12:58 PM

Anaya, I am delighted you like it. 👍. Sara K.

Len Gasun

August 29, 2026 at 7:05 AM

So gorgeous and inspiring my dear poet friend, Sara. Thanks for sharing! Thanks also for my win in your very inspiring contest. Blessings and best winning wishes always. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2026 at 12:57 PM

Your visit has made my day, Len. I need all the blessings I can get. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Valsa George

August 28, 2026 at 9:22 PM

Clouds lifted and hope gleaming in ! Great tanka.

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2026 at 5:38 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the nice review. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Andrea Dietrich

August 28, 2026 at 7:53 PM

Outstanding ending on this one

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2026 at 5:28 AM

Why, thank you, Andrea. Your visit is uplifting. 👍⭐. Sara K.

David Crandall

August 28, 2026 at 7:13 PM

Nice metaphor I think, I ray of sun peaks through a cloud, as we find a ray of hope.

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2026 at 5:24 AM

David, I am more of a down-to-earth person, so much of the time these poems are about my life as I live it, sometimes though they are made up, poetic touches are added but writing this one, I was out walking the dog early in the morning and that is what I saw on this particular work. Your visits are uplifting and encouraging. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Nette Onclaud

August 28, 2026 at 4:36 PM

ohh the unending quest for rose- colored life...beautiful, sara!

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2026 at 5:19 AM

Scattered amongst the roses is always the thorns, Nette, but I take beauty wherever I can get it. Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate the time spent here. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Howard Kerr

August 27, 2026 at 10:54 PM

I am touched by this work Sara at many emotional levels. A haunting perspective that does lift one🔥🔥 Wishing you well, Howard.

Sara Kendrick

August 28, 2026 at 4:39 AM

Your wishes are uplifting, Howard. The clouds are heavy and the air is like a sauna this morning, but the crows and crickets were singing. I appreciate the time spent here. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Yann Rolland

August 27, 2026 at 2:32 PM

we need that, look up? the sky, thank you so much

Sara Kendrick

August 27, 2026 at 5:07 PM

Yann, I am delighted that you saw it as I did that sometimes we just need to look up to make our day. 👍⭐. Sara K.

sara Etgen-Baker

August 27, 2026 at 2:17 PM

simply a beautiful Haiku, Sara K. sending hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick

August 27, 2026 at 4:54 PM

Sara B., your comments are just what I need at this moment in time. I appreciate the hugs. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

August 27, 2026 at 2:00 PM

Dear Sara, there is such a gentle, uplifting tenderness in this image. You’ve captured that subtle, magic threshold where nature mirrors the human heart. A lovely, peaceful, and deeply comforting tanka-like meditation. Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick

August 27, 2026 at 4:50 PM

Why, thank you, Daniel. I am delighted that you felt the peace and magic of nature as well. Your visits are encouraging. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2026 at 10:33 AM

That hope keeps us balanced. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

August 27, 2026 at 1:42 PM

Yes, Kim, the Holy Spirit does try to keep me balanced. Your visit is delightful. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Paul Callus

August 27, 2026 at 7:29 AM

Clouds have the ability to change our moods and emotions, Sara. This tanka aptly manages to do that, eventually helping to raise a "broken spirit". ~ Best regards, my friend.// paul

Sara Kendrick

August 27, 2026 at 10:54 AM

Thank you, Paul. Yes, the sun came out and steamed up our area from the elevated moisture levels, and it is back summertime once again. Your visit was uplifting. 👍. Sara K.