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Clouds

There was a seal in the sky today Along came a bear Who wanted to play Then he turned into a swan As if by the wave of a magic wan Then there was a father playing with his son Holding him up as if they were one Dog was playing with elephant Barking, jumping, romping fun Somehow transformed by the sun Elephant trunk high in air Calling all animals not to despair Earthlings are going to save the day Then we'll all have time to play Turtle swimming in the blue Having so much fun Away from the zoo One lone cloud covering the sun Moved right along, now there are none

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/24/2009 4:28:00 PM
Hi Sara :)You have an amazing imagination that can lead anyones mind on a wonderful journey and by the time they get done reading your poem as I have done today they will leave smiling just like I am ,Thank you for your kind critiiques on two of my poems I am humbled by your words of appreciation.Have a wonderful evening tonight and keep writing because you have a way of making anyones day much brighter after they have had a chance to read some of your poetry.Dean
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Date: 9/23/2009 1:06:00 PM
i like that one it is cool haleigh
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:42:00 PM
So many shapes one can see in clouds Sara, i used to love watching them when i was young>>James
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Date: 9/19/2009 6:50:00 AM
nicely done, too cute;D
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Date: 9/18/2009 11:28:00 PM
Nice......:JP]
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Date: 9/18/2009 6:59:00 PM
delightful!...jim
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